rate_review Reviews

Would love to see Ranma enslaving Nabiki XD

I need more, over anal, no other girl, more Akane slave

I think you should write a sequel where Ranma & Akane enslave shampoo

Don't forget the agreement was between Genma and Soun that a son and daughter would unite the schools. It didn't specify which daughter, so I would think Kasumi, Nabiki, Natsumi, and Kurumi are all fair game. ^_^

Well there is Hinako Ninomiya, Kasumi and Nabiki to break and tame

yes secpnd part with akane sister

great story for what it is and i'd like to see it continued with almost any girl around ranma kasumi nabiki shampoo ukyo kodachi

Good job, I hope you'll be doing sequals for the other girls in the series.

Simple but fun. The entrance of Ryoga was not needed, nor was the parenthesis about birth control. Avoid parenthesis comments in general. A sequel might be fun, use Shampoo or else Ranma's mother.
SailorNemesis

I can't say I enjoyed this much at all, and there are two main reasons why.

First, the change in Ranma's personality isn't remotely believable. So he read a magic book that supposedly changed his entire outlook to one who considers other people as belongings? When you resort to changing the character in sucb a fundamental way, they *stop being that character*. I don't care about this asshole who's taken over Ranma's name. Why should I, when he's just a generic "master" cardboard cutout?

Second, Akane's transformation into a bland, devoted, worshipful slave is practically instantaneous and therefore even more unbelievable than Ranma's transformation.

If this had been, say, some kind of role play on both their parts, that would have been one thing. But this? I just don't buy any of it, and because of that, it just becomes one more in the endless stream of D/s stories one can find online. This one just so happens to feature characters named "Ranma" and "Akane."