rate_review Reviews

I really love how soft this story has become!

Yessss

Ouchhh

Phew i finally finished... I know this fic is unlikely to be finished but I just want to say I really love the gradual mellowing of their love hate relationship into a soft sorta consensual one (with stockholm syndrome). This fic is really entertaining to read!

In chapter thirteen, when Canada says "Kumafrodo" all I see is that scene in Lord of the Rings

"Frodo, the ring!"
And instead of Frodo, it's a polar bear
"ROOOAR"

Quite a lovely story you have here. I have always loved the Russia x America/Ivan x Alfred pairing, but your story makes me love it so much more. I love Ivan's "logic" of caring in the earlier chapters because I could see it as part of his character to think of things in quite a twisted way. I feel bad for Alfred at times, but I like the torture XD Chapter 6 made me happy that they may finally be getting together a bit more and then Alfred just had to run...but hey at least that got them together even more? I am really curious in how this story goes. So far, a you are doing really well! Keep up the great work!

Ouch. Even I felt THAT one...which isn't nessecarily a bad thing, mind.
Overall, very good description but I'd like to see more of Russia's side of things, peek a little into that brain of his. Y'know?

I can honestly say I giggled all the way through this chapter. xD
You kept Russia and the Baltics in character and it was, to put it crudely, 'effin hilarious.