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May 16, 2017 at 12:00 AM
YOU DONT OWN ME!!!! died so hard
Great work, plz continue, include gardevior next :3
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July 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. Would love to read more of it.
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January 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, not bad at all. I'd work on breaking up the paragraphs a bit. Some parts run on and on, and then it's a bunch of single sentence parts where people speak. Which is fine, but just needs to be broken up properly. :3 I still voted 5/5, since it's got potential. Keep up the good work!
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October 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was a beautiful unexpected fanfic. I am a bit saddened that it hasn't been updated in a while, as I would love to see more about this Pokemon Club and the concept.
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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ur story gives a whole new meaning to Pokemon, human relations. I find it both vivid and a wonderful read, i'm not much for this type of thing but i found myself wanting to read on. I thank u for this amazing story it is a work of art, and hope u and more chapters to it.
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December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Epic story i realy look forwerd to the next chapter!Man this fic is Good i cant wate! ^_^!
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November 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
you good sir have talent as a writer and if you wanted to im sure you can if you have not already write novels like this and have best sellers on your hands your story is in a word riveting i found myself unable to put it down please continue and if u have more i want a copy please e-mail me
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August 8, 2011 at 12:00 AM
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July 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow this is an awesome story, I seriously can't wait to see what happens next and I hope whatever it is, is soon. I don't know if your up for requests or not but let us know
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July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Quite an excellent story thus far. I must say, I like your adding in meaningful context to a story rather than just smut, while also including quite good smut. I'm intrigued to see how the story will unfold. If I might have one piece of constructive criticism, I might suggest you try and find another way to divide thought text from spoken text. I spent about five minutes puzzling out the opening before I realized what it was supposed to be. Perhaps that's just me being stupid, but it might help with the story understanding