rate_review Reviews

Hi! I'd like to begin by saying I read and am reviewing your story via my 'Droid, so it's been just a tad more difficult than it ought.
I caught a fair amount of errors in your story that distracted me quite a bit, but they were nothing I couldn't ignore as a happy audience. However I felt that these errors could have been avoided with a proper look-over. What you need, dear, is an editor! Are you open to such a thing?
I really enjoyed the dynamics you introduced of Claude and Alois. They're characters that I don't know much about, because at the moment I'm held strictly to the "manga-verse" (though that'll change soon enough with the purchase of my laptop); but even though I'm inexperienced with these two, I still felt their personalities vividly.
As far as Ciel and Sebastian go, for the sake of sounding jaded and biased, I adored the way you gave a sweet focus to their partnership. It left me really intent on wanting to read more of your depiction of the two.
Anyway, if you couldn't already tell, I really enjoyed your story! I sincerely hope you write more soon. I'm eager! (:
Feel free to contact me via my e-mail, hannahhashabits @ rocketmail . com.

Thanks!
~ Hannah