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for The General's Crusnik

by vbruce

person axlyles
schedule December 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was too funny. What was Lucien thinking when Abel was having sex with Astha with a plug in Abel's butt. Is it possible that he might make an offer to Astha to return with him and Abel or will she try to find a way to stay close to Abel without angering Lucien. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work and Happy Holidays!!!
person axlyles
schedule November 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
When I first read Chapter 1, I thought to myself "I know this character but where?' The more I read, the more I started to squeal in delight. I love the way you are crossing Trinity Blood and Forever Knight. Like peanut butter cups old sale pitch "Two great tastes that goes great together". Great job and I can't wait for the next chapter. I see a great long series in the making.
person Anon
schedule February 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, I am looking forward to reading your next update.
person KayElena
schedule October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Very interesting and extremely well writtten. I'm looking forward to your next update to see where this is going :)

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