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I just skimmed through this, not really looking for anything and found myself rather impressed. A Pokemon on Pokemon love story is actually rare, let alone a good one. This was cute, impressive, sexy, certainly fap worth material. Plus it's well writen. You did a wonderful job on this story Gardie. My only criticism is the in story breaks or seperators, dividing the scenes. They just come up suddenly and almost meld with actual story. Maybe just do two enters, put the divider in the second slot, then one enter, and continue the story from there. So it would look like

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this. Though obviously, don't just chop up a sentence. 5 stars