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Okay so either you updated or I am completely blind and didn't see the next few chapters!!! But I am caught up, at least I think!! But still not finished!! Please finish soon... I realise I am possibly your most pushiest fan of late but I do it out of love! haha Seriously loving this story. Want more. Need more. JUST HAVE TO KNOW HOW IT ENDS!! Thanks for sharing your story too btw, I feel it is very brave :)

This story is so good!! Please update soon!! I simply have to know the ending!! So sad about what happened to Wolfram though... wish he didn't get...you know. But it was cool how the story kept going in different directions. I must admit I was not expecting a lot of that. It differently had food for thought. It had logical and heartache, either choice was a difficult one, which is realistic and I appreciate that. You have given the characters a lot of respect, Wolfram tends to always get shit sometimes, so I am glad you made him a strong character. Although it would be nice if he wasn't always getting it... hopefully he can have his turn not always having to be the girl in the relationship hahahaha Anyways, your writing is very good, there were a few times I was like "I love how they wrote that" PLEASE UPDATE SOON! It is actually killing me not knowing. haha Please =D

I can't agree more with Conrad, the bastard! Surely he understands, even if it is tradition, no slap was meant to cause harm. Grr... Thank you for sharing the story has my attention so far and I'll be commenting as I go. I'm surprised no one has commented. your story has much promise.

Ah, no! Your descriptions are wonderful of there emotions and I'm uneasy to with a curl to my stomach... so soon. Too soon and it is not right, but what can you do when so many lives are at stake.

You expressed well their emotions. And I had to make myself stop from going to the next chapter to comment ^_^ thank you for sharing

Beautiful story, I want to know what's going on with Wolf and if in fact he is being treated well. Thank you for writing, if there is more, please write on ^_^

hoho... "loan" It makes me wonder if Alfi is aware if what Wolf writes in his letters or just very aware of his mortality.