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Hmm, well, maybe not spectacular, but I do believe he wasn't going to call her that night? So, yeah, FAIL! He's so still in love with her. As to the fall of the Galaxy Alliance, I suppose that's as good an explanation as any. Well, until chapter 12, then. Laters.

Uh, huh, not out of contorl, whatever you say, Lotor, buddy. I look forward to the spectacular failure, and you're welcome for the laugh. I know how you feel, my first "intermission" chapters, of sorts, for WA was exceptionally infuriating to get out! I kind of knew what I wanted to do with it when I started, but then I slammed into some of the worst writer's block I think I've ever encountered! Fortunately the chapter is finally finished, and I just need to get my butt back to work on the next one... Well, until chapter 10, then. Laters.

Yeah, Lotor, reeeeaaaal in control. I'm with Hagar, imminent disaster, for him! I also pity the poor guy sent to Arus. Well, until chapter 10, then. Laters.

Hmm, interesting introspective for Allura, I must say. As much as I hope she'll come around and feel better, I honestly can't see that happening anytime soon. As to your issues, dang. shame about the foot pad, and I think you maybe should have asked your dentist about the implant, if nothing else. Oh, well, nothing either of us can really do about it now. I don't suppose you'll be adding to "Enemy" or "Songbird" anytime soon? Well, until chapter 9, then. Laters.

Well, Lotor seems more screwed up than usual. Somehow, I have a hard time seeing this end even remotely well, but I guess we'll see what happens. Frankly, I really need to get my own butt back to work on Witch's Apprentice... ^_^; As to your current medical condition, yikes. I hope it's nothing life threatening. Though in regards to the tooth, wouldn't having it pulled be more expensive than the root canal, not less, since afterward you'll have to pay for the implant to replace it and surgery to have the implant put in? I've, thankfully, only had one root canal in my life to date, and it only cost $1000 and change to have done(course that was before I learned I was going to need three more caps, and one of them with Crown Extension Surgery, wheee....). Just saying. Well, until chapter 8, then. Laters.

My, my, my, but your mind has gone down a dark road here. I might point out that it would've helped to have a better explanation for why the Galaxy Alliance fell apart, but i can see how that's not completely relevant to the tale at hand. I trepidatiously await the next chapter. And on an unrelated note, what medical issues did you, or are you, have? Well, until chapter 7, then. Laters.