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November 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say that I found this and enjoyed it. I see you are still writing, and would love to read more of this story if you ever write more.
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November 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE continue soon, i love this story TracyxMisty in this rocks,and though ash is a dick its still awesome, please update soon
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September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG soooo goood!!! Stayed up till 1:00 reading it all.... Wow very well done. any more?
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June 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is AWESOME, Spiral. I LOVE it. Dramatic, Romantic, and very.... INTENSE. It's awesome. Keep up the AMAZING work, I can't wait for the next chapter!
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June 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Can I just say how much I love this story? I never really thought much of Tracey in the anime, but you have really brought him to life! I love the constantly differing levels of tension throughout the story. You have gotten me to care for the characters and their feelings in this work and that is one of the things that I look for as a reader. I want to turn back time and make it be Tracey that is with Misty that night instead of Ash. Tracey obviously cares so much for her and you do an excellent job of portraying that. I cannot wait for the twelfth chapter!!!
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March 22, 2012 at 12:00 AM
hello again! sorry i havent responded in a while but ive been incredibly busy. keep up the good work!
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February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
wow ash is being a total jerk..now i really hope misty goes to Tracy! good work..kinda creeped out that the head of team rocket is ash's dad...creepy...cant wait for the next chapter!
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February 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
woot! after i finished reading chapter 9 you updated! I am glad ash is stepping up, but i wish misty would be with Tracy! cant wait to read more!
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February 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
glad you updated again! was worried it was gonna be a while because of all the new changes! this made my day! I freaked out when i thought there was gonna be a miscarriage! I almost cried. Glad you didn't go that route. I would have been mad as hell if you went that route. So Ash is coming back? Not sure I am happy about that. I want Tracy and Misty together! Lol.. hope you are working on the next chapter and I am getting ideas for a Pokemon fic and was wondering if maybe we could collaborate? just a suggestion lol :D
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January 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
DUN DUN DUN!!! XD this made my night! sweet! O loved it! Cant wait for the next chapter and i hope misty says she loves him too and screws ash. I always liked ash/misty but for you i love tracy/misty lol