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for Oh, Hell

by Arianawray

person Vyper
schedule March 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I was slightly upset that Claude got to sample Sebastian before Ciel, but I was pleased that Ciel went back with Sebastian to his home.
person Vyper
schedule March 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I loved the parts where the socks ended up over Sebastian's cock. That was rather amusing. I am also glad Alois has Claude for life. I just think Sebastian and Ciel will last longer with their bits of hot and cold. I do hope you write another one. I love Black Butler and these stories are awesome.
person Vyper
schedule March 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have to review by chapter since this is too funny. The first chapter is simply hilarious especially Sebastian's POV. Alois kissing better than Sebastian seems impossible. It has to be impossible. Still I laughed so hard at the end of the chapter I about died. It is great and I can't wait to review the next one.
person Vyper
schedule March 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I love the recipes Sebastian comes up with for Claude and Alois. I wish he would actually make them into these things. I am starting to feel sorry for Sebastian at this point.
person Vyper
schedule March 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You make me feel so bad for Sebastian. He is really having a sucky time with Ciel. Ciel is being such a brat too. It is so like him, but not. It makes me kind of sad since Sebastian is really trying. I just don't want to think of any other touching Ciel. I want Sebastian to be the only one to touch Ciel and it pisses me off that Alois and Claude are touching him.
person Vyper
schedule March 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Sebastian so far is not winning points with Ciel, but hopefully will soon. I have to say I am a bit bummed that Ciel went so easily with Claude even if I do understand. I just wish that Ciel would give Sebastian a chance although I think this time away will give them both what they need.
schedule June 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"hanging from Claude's arm like a rather gaudy handbag"
ahh.... the moment I read that line I knew I was in for a treat!
I confess that I hated claude/hannah/alois/luka, and I didn't think I'd enjoy a future fic with them in it. But your writing skills are strong, and this was both hysterical & touching.
In particular I liked your characterization of Sebastian, and the nasty little jibes aimed at Alois as expressed through Sebastian or through his thoughts. I adore the butler, and I couldn't stand Alois, so you can imagine my delight. The imagined recipes for Lhasa Apso & Spiders was a brilliant addition.
As to your writing skills, wonderful. This story flowed easily and was descriptive without being overly-so. And it was a love story without being sappy.
Thanks for sharing this!
schedule March 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Thoroughly entertaining! Very nice job.
person Anon
schedule February 24, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Loved the whole thing, it was an adorable little story!
person Anon
schedule February 16, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well. That took a turn for the smexy! =D Did not see that coming! And I guess Ciel didn't, either!

This story is so much fun! I loved Devilish Impulses to pieces, but it's nice to see these two in a more fanciful world which doesn't inhibit them or the storyline as much.

I'm definitely glad that Ciel got to go back, and am intrigued for things to come!

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