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please update this its amazing, and i hope keitaro doesn't turn out like his dad, because that would suck, and i hope he doesn;t have any part in this story apart from that brief cameo

Have you thought of doing a story of Negima? Or even a Naruto one?

I really like this story however I'm not that into femdom so I try to skim those parts when I can. I'm kinda of hope that you give us a little warning of sorts in the future. I am looking forward to see how the rest of the girls are seduced into the harem and are whored out. Maybe you can make another story based in Negima involving a sibling/relative of Eukanaria? Or maybe To Love-Ru? You should challenge other writers to make a Succubus Love series/stories where a succubus seduces the cast of an anime/manga series.

When will Keitaro grow a pair if balls and take charge

Really glad you updated this story some more...Love you slutty Shinobu although I do think that after 100 cocks she'd be pretty sore.
Hoping you concentrate on one of the other girls for a while.
Keep up the good work.

Ok so I REALLY liked this story at first and once things started developing I was ok with some things and got over others. Talking about whoring out Kitsune, Motoko, and Naru I was fine with. I was happy when Shinobu didn't want to sleep with anyone but Keitaro and when he was told that Shinobu and Su wouldn't be forced to sleep with anyone else. Now I know that Shinobu is getting a harem now because she wants one and I understand that she REALLY enjoys sex now but I feel like she really didn't love Keitaro and he was more of a crush with how easily she started to get interested in other guys (in a way) I was ok with Shirai being Haruka's pet but using a dildo on him was another thing that I didn't really like to read. I understand that this is what they want and the way the story is going but I'm slowly losing interest in it with some of the things being added. I'll read this chapter and see how bad the next one is but if it gets any more extreme I might stop reading this one. You're story is great don't get me wrong but some of the content isn't for me

I absolutely adore your Femdom stories. You know exactly how to get that fun, abusive energy without becoming too gross and scatological.

Very nice chapter....I must say you are the only author I know who can write really good femdom.
Keep up the good work

Please comtinue this and Hentai love. you can do one fic of negima same this.

Really liking this story....I was wondering if you could put in a Naru gloryhole scene, cause that would be kinda hot.
Looking forward to more exhibitionist behaviour from Shinobu....and will this story really have watersports in it?
Keep up the good work.