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I thought that this was very well written and at certain times, I could even see scenes from the story playing out in my head. This side of Arthur is deeper than most I've seen in fan-fiction and certainly in my own. The style and themes were rather inspiring and heavy, I have to say that I deeply enjoyed it. Keep up the good work~

Oh my! I can't believe this is the end already, (I've been following it for some time). for some reason I'm drawn towards fanfics with Ivan and yours are full of it. I hope you'll write another one.(PLEAAAASEEEEE..?) Not trying to sound too eager. But I REALLY enjoyed this story. When Arthur died in the first ending I felt some tears dropping down my face, and nearly again at the second part. Until I realized they couldn't be held apart. (Tears of happiness) Forgive me for my..emotional outburst but I really can't help it. They make me feel girly but enough about that. I LOVE YOUR STORIES. I LOVE YOU. <3

PS: If you ARE going to write another fanfic, I hope it's not too much to ask if you could email me,(flappy27@hotmail.com), since I share alot of these stories with my friends, though I'll be checking your page frequently.
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BWAH. ♥ This was what I was hoping for, been checking for this update every day (And sometimes multiplue times a day) since your last. I can't believe there's only one more chapter, but you're the boss. You've created one of the best stories I've ever written. Keep up the good work. ♥

Oh my, my heart is squeezed. I know it's inevitable. It's still so cruel to Arthur. It made me wonder if Arthur will ever be truely happy. War surely hurts everyone.
BTW, I can't wait to see Gilbert's reaction when he heard the news. Good job!!

..I'm pretty sure I've reviewed before but... I love it, all the way. Please don't stop updating. ♥

Oh my goodness!! Chapter 8 is so hilarious. I can't stop laughing right now. Having Ludwig here is really a great idea. ROFL
By the way, I'm starting to dislike Alfred now. He is selfish and disloyal. I though he was with Kiku only a few times before being caught. Speaking of Kiku, is he the person Arthur want to consult with?

Oh, I really love how this story progressed. Your choice of adding Ludwig to the scene surprised and excited me. I'm looking forward to reading what Arthur is going to do with Ludwig to make Ivan jealous. XD

Umm.... I think you forgot to post chapter 4. Never mind that. I'm so glad there is new chapter posted.
It's getting hot and hotter. Arthur is so mischievous. Like Ivan said, he is playing with fire. But there is no turning back.
I wish Arthur would be more honest to himself or Alfred. To me, he is like a lonely child acting tough. He need to accept he also want warmth. Not now, I guess. Maybe after he defeat Ivan?
Can't wait to read more!! XD

Oh, Arthur! There is no turning back now, is there? I can't wait to read how Arthur will seduce Ivan and win Gilbert over with trust. Good job! XD

It's very interesting. Can't wait to read the next chapter. :D