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And then what happens? I'm dying here. I really like this story. It could use some editing, and I'd prefer past-tense to present-tense, but the story and characters shine through, making it a worthwhile read.

I'm so, so sorry I just disappeared like that! I went to visit my family in WV for a few weeks, and they don't have internet (and for almost a week there, they didn't have electricity, but things are better now). But I come back and you're all the way up to chapter 4! I'm actually surprised by how quickly we reached a controntation between the main characters. And even though it's Ranka being stalked and attacked, I just feel so bad for Kyoya. After jumping into the fray and getting hurt, everyone just treats him like some stupid kid with questionable motives. But there's definitely a spark there, and I'm so excited to see it develop. I wonder what he's going to say at school tomorrow when Tamaki and the twins start harassing him about those bruises. And surely Haruhi will put two and two together. Ooh, this is so exciting!

I love this and can't wait for more. It's great to see into Kyoya's head, see those little bits of personality he hides so well. I'm really excited to see where you go with this.