rate_review Reviews

Thank you for a very fun read overall. Luffy was portrayed in a very realistic Luffy style which is rare in fan fictions involving sexuality and him in particular. Thanks so much for the epic moments of laughter you devised in this story. I do hope you will continue to add chapters to this story as I would love to see how this ends. I would suggest running your chapters through a grammar and spell checker before posting as a few times you used the wrong word, but I got the gist of which one you meant through context. Overall, a very good idea you had with this story, and I do hope you continue to work on this story as the real world allows.

Why would zoro need training from a warlord? He just trained with mihawk for two years.