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June 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well... Since i started reading i wasn´t taking seriously this, one of the reasons is you only watched the anime and didn´t read the manga and i hardly like fics based in the anime. Now, i couldn´t read anymore when you used the mushrooms, i don´t get how people could even like that chapter if they like Ranma and Akane, i mean, why? They are not them! If i would like a lovey dovey pairing, i wouldn´t be reading something about them but some shoujo idk. Is not that hard to write lemon and keep their personality i promise. Tltr; you just killed Ranma and Akane essence, and obviously the sexual tension between them making them all lovey dovey and making that in a M fic is definitely a big NO
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March 27, 2013 at 12:00 AM
One, wallotext, kags.
Two, asks and said both used - please pick a tense. Didn't read it, just skimmed it. Please fix it.