rate_review Reviews

Damn!it's a shame i'll never get to see another chapter. This story was fucking awsome. I especially like, was it Alastro? (Sorry I for got his name). He has a similar property like Jackal of Tartarus AND IS A DEMON, LUST LIKE JACKAL! And to top it all off you introduced your character be for Jackal was ever shown in the manga! It was great while it lasted,I'm o lyrics praying you switched over the Fanfiction.net

This story is awesome, I can't wait to see what happens next.

FAN!~

I have really enjoyed reading your stories, and so far this has been one of my favorites. I hope that you continue to evolve this story as I can't wait to see what happens next.

guy i have a question
did mira won natsu's heart or natsu will betray mira on the future?
because i like this couple and i think it's nice if they be together all the story

I really like reading this fan fiction. So far, you have impressed me with both your creativity and writing style. I have read every posted chapter two or three times and can't wait for the next one. The events in this past chapter are as far as I have seen in the anime, and I have to say: I applaud your ability to write such a vastly different story, yet keep so many of the details the same. If I might ask, do you have a planned number of chapters in this story arc, or is it going to remain ongoing until you lose interest? That is the only thing that I would hate to see, either you grow bored with the idea, or a life event occurs preventing you from continuing your posts before you conclude the arc. I hope you keep up the excellent story telling and I can't wait to see what happens next.

this isnt really a review. but I didn't know how else to contact the author of this fanfic, I thought you might want to know that you have your wording a bit off. Every time you say "stellar" its actually supposed to be "celestial" like celestial spirits and celestial keys. I promise I'm not trying to be annoying, but whether you watch the English version or the official Dvd's with subtitles that's how it translates. Hope I didn't offend you but I wanted to help.

I love this fanfic!!!XD

Though i've never been a fan of MarijanexNatsu but I think u just converted me it my OTP. Im new to this site and this was the first story I read, and it is great

Cant wait for the next chapter! :)
Boo~ . . .its fantasma!XD

Lucy next! Lucy next!

very nice story though i do hope you add Levy to Natsu's harem it would be interesting to see and please make the next lemon between him and Lucy