rate_review Reviews

That last chapter absolutely summed up Luffy's approach to sex. I both loved it and laughed.
The rest of it did its very best to make me cry (a couple of phrases didn't sound very Luffy-like but who knows how serious Luffy'll get if he's dead?!) and goddamn.

I'm in two minds about this. On one hand it is a fantastic story that plays with emotions like a master pianist. But on the other it's a story that plays with emotions like a master pianist. Never have I found anything where the term 'emotional roller coaster' are more appropriate. You caused to me become depressed, then happy/sad and finally horny. You should consider a career within psychology, fiction writing or government. For some reason I'm a little put off that your longest chapter as the lemon, but no matter. This was a magnificent story and you should be proud of this work.