rate_review Reviews

Fun story to read. I got a great laugh when I read the Timing game chapter. You did a good job of making it interesting for me to read despite my normal lack of interest in BDSM variety tales. Hope you will continue to write because this has a lot of potential. I would suggest doing a grammar check if you have such a program to clean up run on sentences and missing commas in conversation spots. Otherwise, a pretty entertaining reading experience over all.

Awesome writing, thank you!

You did a really good job writing this story! It didn't feel cheesy like a lot of the stories I've read on here are. Great job! :)

I absolutely love your writing style, it has been a while since I have read an entire story in a night! I was happy to read how the character personalities match closely to how they really are. The pairings are perfect in my opinion, and Shanks is my absolute favorite. I look forward to reading the final chapter.

awesome! i'm a big fan of MihawkxZoro, MihawkxShanks (through for me Mihawk is always the top) would love to read a 10th chapter.

didn't know you were on here but glad to see you great fic i liked it and im not a mihawk zoro fan I'm really not, but i'd rather see a scene of those two over the constant Zoro/Sanji stuff, This fic was great you had a flow I like how you did it I like Shanks being Mihawk's teacher then mihawk teaching Zoro for Luffy

this story makes me think what if Shanks found Luffy because of Reighleigh and trained him or reighleigh trained Luffy to use haki in sex, you not only opened the door to variety you walked in and had a party, I am a huge fan of Luffy Zoro works and this one was really special i like you made mention to luffy topping i loved the last chap Luffy going over and all that,

If you make a chap 10 i'd love for a 4some to go a mix match of Shanks/Luffy/Zoro/Mihawk Shanks and Mihawk fucking Luffy and Zoro letting the two lovers make out and frot something like that Shanks and Mihawk are so perverted I love it