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by tinkerheck

person KHRLover1997
schedule August 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i love the ending, i also read this fic at FFN, and was sad when chp 10 says completed until i read the chap!!! ^_^ I love you so much*though i don't know you*
person persephone
schedule August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. OC's -_-

Stop writing self-insert fics please.
person Little Black Kitty
schedule August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well... I am well and truly at a loss for words. If I wasn't in tears at the end of this chapter I was so after going to Youtube and following your instructions.

So, I woke up at 3am and couldn't go back to sleep and now I am here. I had spent some time meditating and... *sniffles*

I want to say so much. My stomach hurts right along with Alexander/Sebastian. I've a knot in my throat. After listening to Thais Meditation I realized I knew of a piece of music I could see fitting the end of this chapter. I write ... used to write, to it frequently. You'll find it at youtube under "sad romance thao nguyen xanh". I'm going to have to go back to meditation in order to go back to sleep, but I don't regret it a bit. The little twinge in my heart from your story is best felt in the quiet dark. I'm going to go cry now.

Loves to you!
person Little Black Kitty
schedule August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
My dearest, darlingest, most brilliant and wonderful Tinkerheck,

I am sorry I've not been reviewing. I really don't have a good excuse except that I get caught up deep in the throws of something akin to depression, though not quite, it's just the best description. But, I have been reading this whole time. It is five am in the morning and I've not yet been asleep, and amazingly enough I have the energy FINALLY to type you out a review.

I honestly owe you a review as long, brilliant, delicious and satisfying as this chapter has been, but it is five am and I really ought to be at the very least pretending to sleep. Instead I will declare that I love you. I adore you. I am deeply, deeply jealous of you but in the best of ways. I wish I could write like you do.

I love your command of music. It gives Gilda such a realism. She lives and breaths because of these beautiful touches you've given her and Alex (Sebastian), oh my *flutters her hand over her chest* He just ooooooozes sexy and decadent! I love it! I love how you're writing this story. I love how you developed it. I love the lemon. Ohhh the lemon. And the emotions, even Alex's (Sebastian's), even if he doesn't or can't call it love it's just so intense!

When I first started reading your fic, back when you didn't know if you were going to continue it, I believe I told you that anything without Ciel in it is just...meh to me. You make me not miss Ciel. I am dearly in love with Ciel. Not the boy, but what he could have been and *cries* Just... *sniffle* I am so glad you have him here, no matter that he seems to be just a whisper or a wisp or whatever he is... I nearly burst into tears when I realized. *SOB* It's so bittersweet. (I honestly do have tears running down my face...No hyperbole).

I am so glad I happened upon your fic and I am so glad you continued it. I am looking forward with impatience yet trepidation for you continue. I'm very aware that every update brings us closer and closer to the end of a simply stunning work of fic, but I can't help yearning for updates.

Thank you for this story. Thank you for taking the time to write it. Thank you for sharing your talent.

Little Black Kitty
person risi
schedule July 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I could have sworn I reviewed this chapter, but my computer's been acting up, maybe it's out in cyber limbo somewhere. Or maybe I just think I reviewed. (sigh, they say memory is the first to go) Those two mysterious beings, I'm starting to have thoughts on who they might be, but it sounds like they're in the Shimigami library and I can't figure out how they would be there. But whoever they are I really can't wait to find out what they are up to. Time is catching up to Gilda and while I don't think she is regretting the contract I think she's regretting that it's ending. It's one thing to die, everyone does it, but to do die and be nothing afterwords, to be forgotten eventually as those who knew you pass on... that must be a frightening thought. She's not even leaving behind a body of music as a legacy and I wonder if that doesn't sting a bit. Granted Sebastian will remember her, especially as she'll be sustaining him for a good long bit, but she won't know it. Does she wonder if she'll just be another notch on the ol' knife and fork as he goes about looking for a new meal? I can't wait to see what happens.
person Menolly
schedule July 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Gilded is glorious!! I love this story. Well written, beautifully paced and very engaging. I found myself racing home to read the next chapter. Please continue this wonderful story, for all those lurkers like me. This is the first review I have ever felt compelled to write, and it's more of a statement of my appreciation for your work. Thanks!
person risi
schedule July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay, first things first. Sebastian gets a thrill out of ironing?!! LOL!! I feel like Undertaker after getting a good laugh. I'll have you know that I will never again be able to watch the anime episode with the two princes without seeing Sebastian working the fluter and imagine him getting all excited. "Oh yes! Look at these crisp little ruffles! If only the Young Master would wear more girly clothing."

I love that the story is told from Sebastian's viewpoint and how he occaisionally refers to previous masters. You could probably write a fun story out of those recollections since the tidbits are so intriguing. I'm glad to find out what happened to Claude and Hannah though I wonder if Ciel is now wandering around as a bodiless spirit? I'd hate to think of him running into Claude. I hope he didn't just dissapate away. That would be too sad. Anyway, who who who are those two mysterious beings? What do they want? I can't wait to find out.
person ShyOne
schedule July 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Just thought I'd pop in and say that I love this story, I really do. I stumbled upon it recently, and while I'm not too big on reviewing or leaving notes for authors, yours deserves praise. So I'm praising you!
schedule July 7, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Half the contract's done! omg.

SO MANY QUESTIONS. Of course I have many many stab-theories, but I can wait until they're revealed naturally........ I hope.

Man that cat form shore is the ultimate tool of persuasion - and I totally buy into it. I can rattle off the names of around twelve people, no problem, who'd agree to some straight up -shit- if I approached them as a cat.

I myself am not a cat person, not my cup of tea.. but I understand such cups of tea in general. Most puppies turn me into an embarrassing person.

Twas a good move for Alexander. You GO, man.

And yay! They're finally TOUCHING NAUGHTILY. Even though, what the eff! There's all these awful depressive/oppressing feelings in the air while doing so!

My emotion-maker is IN RUINZ. Oh, noooo, Gilda! You've gotta believe! You've gotta believe SO YOUR SEX LIFE CAN EXPLODE.

I am TERRIFIED (I will stop talking in caps, soon! SOON) of what will happen when the Miss' father is approached by.... certain unsavory characters. Terrified and elated. Oh, how I hope I can wait without pitching a fit. We shall see.

I know there has to be plenty more that I should comment on, but I'm having issues with recall, I think I'll start opening a little notepad, as I read.

Very well done, ma'am. Just one big cascade of mo' excellence.
schedule June 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
WOMAN.

I can't believe you don't have any praise! You are a treMENDOUS writer - my shoulders would literally do a little excited shrug-dance at the end of every chapter, and I couldn't hit that "Next Chapter" button fast enough, believe you me. YES, of COURSE I read it all in one go like a glutton, because it really is JUSTTHATGOOD.

I am nothing like Sebastian/Alexander in that respect; if you present me with amazing consumables I damn well will hork 'em all down like a hog. No shame.

I did take ONE pee break, but, rest assured (or disturbed) that it was agonizing; the whole time I sat there all I could think was how I wrong it was.

UNACCEPTABLE, BLADDER.

About your story here: I'm curious to see what you've got in them magic sorceress sleeves now that ol' Gilda's got the Alexanderphobia. Part of me is grieving, but the other part is very interested in where it'll go from here - you've proved yourself one creative gal, and I trust that you fabricated this (pretty tragic!) setback for a reason that I will be eager to gobble.

Thank you for writing! Know that I'll be reading anydamnthing you post.

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