rate_review Reviews

It's been a while since I've been on this site, so I apologize for not having a review up earlier. First off, this story was quite lovely to read; It was so lovely I sometimes found myself laughing at the loveliness of the story (in other words, it was great). What I loved is that you managed to mix the right amount of feelings into the story, so there wasn't one dominate feeling, aside from love of course. Another thing I loved is that you managed to keep Haruhi and Takeshi in character, even in a story such as this one (love story). That's one of the hardest things to do in a fan fiction, but you managed to nail it on the head, in my personal opinion (I unfortunately have very little experience in writing, but that's besides the point). On another note: I had that whole "gushy" feeling when they finally got home at the end.

All in all, I loved reading this story, and I hope to see you continue writing great stories like this one :)