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for Showers and Bedrooms

by D-Wolf

person tamasama
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It would be great if you broke the paragraphs apart. As it is now, it's hard on the eyes so I can't really read it. Here's hoping you fix it, Liechtenstein's a cutey.

Also, there are better ways to move us through a flashback than *flashback start* and *flashback end*.

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