AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for Showers and Bedrooms

by D-Wolf

person tamasama
schedule October 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It would be great if you broke the paragraphs apart. As it is now, it's hard on the eyes so I can't really read it. Here's hoping you fix it, Liechtenstein's a cutey.

Also, there are better ways to move us through a flashback than *flashback start* and *flashback end*.

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?

Need Help? Click Here or Try Again