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August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 44 review:
Ah, N, even though I'm not exactly a fan of him, I do find him an interesting character.
Ugh, I get irritated whenever I think of the teenage atheist extremists doing this anti-religion bullshit, even if it's in fanfiction stories. They fail to realize that they are no better than the Nazis being doing this stuff, idiots. -_-
Ash wants more than just Mina now, huh? XD
Suicide spies? If they don't believe in anything after death, then why were they so eager to die?
Unfortunately I don't have anything else to say on this chapter, sorry. :P
Now to the next one-
Ah, N, even though I'm not exactly a fan of him, I do find him an interesting character.
Ugh, I get irritated whenever I think of the teenage atheist extremists doing this anti-religion bullshit, even if it's in fanfiction stories. They fail to realize that they are no better than the Nazis being doing this stuff, idiots. -_-
Ash wants more than just Mina now, huh? XD
Suicide spies? If they don't believe in anything after death, then why were they so eager to die?
Unfortunately I don't have anything else to say on this chapter, sorry. :P
Now to the next one-
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August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 45 review:
Ah, Team Rocket, no matter how many poundings they get, they never go away. Except now, they turned more than twice as bad as they used to be, thanks to good ol Silver (son of Giovanni)...who died in this chapter. Well, one villain out of the way.
But man, Arceus sure got trashed. I honestly hope that this is the end of Team Rocket, as I feel they've been far overused. In the anime, and fanfics alike. But oh well, at least it's tolerable in the BioStar Chronicles.
(lol, you made my self-insert OOC. I don't say stuff like "Holy toledo" )
Some of the paragraphs were a little too long to read, it'd be good to space them out in the future, imo.
Glad to see Celestia getting a good letter for once.
King Sombra's back?! D:
Wish I had more to say, but I don't, sorry again. :P
Now onto the next chapter-
Ah, Team Rocket, no matter how many poundings they get, they never go away. Except now, they turned more than twice as bad as they used to be, thanks to good ol Silver (son of Giovanni)...who died in this chapter. Well, one villain out of the way.
But man, Arceus sure got trashed. I honestly hope that this is the end of Team Rocket, as I feel they've been far overused. In the anime, and fanfics alike. But oh well, at least it's tolerable in the BioStar Chronicles.
(lol, you made my self-insert OOC. I don't say stuff like "Holy toledo" )
Some of the paragraphs were a little too long to read, it'd be good to space them out in the future, imo.
Glad to see Celestia getting a good letter for once.
King Sombra's back?! D:
Wish I had more to say, but I don't, sorry again. :P
Now onto the next chapter-
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August 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Review of the final chapter:
That's kind of an odd way to end the story, but I understand. Anyways, I thought this was pretty cool, and even though it wasn't exactly what I'd consider a full covering of a revisit to the first five regions, this was good enough for me. So I say good job.
This does make me eager to see what's next, and I'm betting it's highly likable. I think it's good to take a revisit through the first five regions of the Pokemon world, and nostalgic of an experience when revisiting the first two. Pretty good job here.
Again, the end could have been better, but I understand. With X & Y coming out, and running out of ideas given the story's basis and the continuity limitations, it makes sense to me.
Congrats for finishing this story, I look forward to reading what you have next.
That's kind of an odd way to end the story, but I understand. Anyways, I thought this was pretty cool, and even though it wasn't exactly what I'd consider a full covering of a revisit to the first five regions, this was good enough for me. So I say good job.
This does make me eager to see what's next, and I'm betting it's highly likable. I think it's good to take a revisit through the first five regions of the Pokemon world, and nostalgic of an experience when revisiting the first two. Pretty good job here.
Again, the end could have been better, but I understand. With X & Y coming out, and running out of ideas given the story's basis and the continuity limitations, it makes sense to me.
Congrats for finishing this story, I look forward to reading what you have next.
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August 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 43 review:
Horse X Human? o_o
Err, whatever, anyways----
The oppression from the atheist jerks, though this is a fanfic, it's sad how much it resembles the real life cruelty of the world's teenagers. And of course how similar it is to how low teens are willing to sink in order to gain a kind of world that would only exist in theory. Children can be so stupid, especially when it comes to religion and politics.
What's the story with Liron? When did she appear in the timeline?
I spy a group of traitors. >:|
Ehh, I don't really have anything else to say about this one, sorry. :P
Now to the next chapter-
Horse X Human? o_o
Err, whatever, anyways----
The oppression from the atheist jerks, though this is a fanfic, it's sad how much it resembles the real life cruelty of the world's teenagers. And of course how similar it is to how low teens are willing to sink in order to gain a kind of world that would only exist in theory. Children can be so stupid, especially when it comes to religion and politics.
What's the story with Liron? When did she appear in the timeline?
I spy a group of traitors. >:|
Ehh, I don't really have anything else to say about this one, sorry. :P
Now to the next chapter-
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February 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 42 review:
More camp scenarios, eh? How many of these will we be seeing, I wonder? I liked how Lucas used Soul Caliber on the nazis though. XD
I also liked the baseball game with Lucas, that was cool.
Ah, Red, the one that the announcer called "the living legend" at the world tournament. I wonder, is he just as tough in the BioStar chronicles?
Damn, more abusive trainers. -_-
Autobots? Here? AWESOME!!!
I'd like to see Predacons, Vehicons, and Decepticons, but it's okay if you don't include them. :P
Red Alert is right, the Nazis were indeed worse than the Decepticons, worse than they could ever hope to be!
I'm looking forward to what you have next, update when possible-
More camp scenarios, eh? How many of these will we be seeing, I wonder? I liked how Lucas used Soul Caliber on the nazis though. XD
I also liked the baseball game with Lucas, that was cool.
Ah, Red, the one that the announcer called "the living legend" at the world tournament. I wonder, is he just as tough in the BioStar chronicles?
Damn, more abusive trainers. -_-
Autobots? Here? AWESOME!!!
I'd like to see Predacons, Vehicons, and Decepticons, but it's okay if you don't include them. :P
Red Alert is right, the Nazis were indeed worse than the Decepticons, worse than they could ever hope to be!
I'm looking forward to what you have next, update when possible-
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February 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Would you please center the page that way no one has to scroll around
Thankyou
Thankyou
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January 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 41 review:
Looks like Arceus is going to have a step-father. o_o
And looks like Lucas is going to have some more children.
And it also looks like we're going to be seeing more Nazis sent to hell and more jewish people freed from their unwarrented confinement.
The elite H8ters sure are evil a-holes, that's certain. Poor Arceus....
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Watch your mouth Archaera, lol. XD
Man, those H8ters are really immature, aren't they?
It was a dumb move of Archaera to fight while she was pregnant. That could damage the unborn baby if she got hit in the wrong spot.
More camp scenarios, eh?
Gah, another cliff hanger, but I don't have a problem with it. Sorry about the short length of the review, but I can't really think of anything else to put.
Update when possible-
Looks like Arceus is going to have a step-father. o_o
And looks like Lucas is going to have some more children.
And it also looks like we're going to be seeing more Nazis sent to hell and more jewish people freed from their unwarrented confinement.
The elite H8ters sure are evil a-holes, that's certain. Poor Arceus....
._.
Watch your mouth Archaera, lol. XD
Man, those H8ters are really immature, aren't they?
It was a dumb move of Archaera to fight while she was pregnant. That could damage the unborn baby if she got hit in the wrong spot.
More camp scenarios, eh?
Gah, another cliff hanger, but I don't have a problem with it. Sorry about the short length of the review, but I can't really think of anything else to put.
Update when possible-
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December 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 40 review:
Atlantis, an interesting concept to add to the story, along with its relation to the other divine beings that weren't included in its mythology.
The H8ters should be eradicated completely, not a single one should be left alive. The same goes for those atheist jerks and their Nazi cousins.
I like the inclusion of sci-fi elements into this story, I've always had an obsession with that stuff, even since I was a kid.
Crap, good thing the Caedes clan wasn't there. Otherwise the good guys would be spending the next few months cleaning the blood and gore off of the Sinnoh region, which would be littered with the bodies of atheists (the Caedes clan loathes atheists with a passion).
And that alternate world, the sad part is that's EXACTLY how this world (we were born on) would be if the atheists had their way. It's no joke or exaggeration, how atheists are in this story is NO different from how they are in real life, with the exception of the fact that they're too spineless and cowardly to carry out these acts in reality.
Yes indeed, the morality of the atheists in this story is no different from real life atheists, not in the slightest.
The atheist tyrants getting killed, that's one the things that deserves the most applause in this fic. I feel bad for Arceus, he doesn't deserve to get harmed like that. D:
Now he's having nightmares about that crap. I wonder, will the descendant of Marcus appear soon? Update when possible-
Atlantis, an interesting concept to add to the story, along with its relation to the other divine beings that weren't included in its mythology.
The H8ters should be eradicated completely, not a single one should be left alive. The same goes for those atheist jerks and their Nazi cousins.
I like the inclusion of sci-fi elements into this story, I've always had an obsession with that stuff, even since I was a kid.
Crap, good thing the Caedes clan wasn't there. Otherwise the good guys would be spending the next few months cleaning the blood and gore off of the Sinnoh region, which would be littered with the bodies of atheists (the Caedes clan loathes atheists with a passion).
And that alternate world, the sad part is that's EXACTLY how this world (we were born on) would be if the atheists had their way. It's no joke or exaggeration, how atheists are in this story is NO different from how they are in real life, with the exception of the fact that they're too spineless and cowardly to carry out these acts in reality.
Yes indeed, the morality of the atheists in this story is no different from real life atheists, not in the slightest.
The atheist tyrants getting killed, that's one the things that deserves the most applause in this fic. I feel bad for Arceus, he doesn't deserve to get harmed like that. D:
Now he's having nightmares about that crap. I wonder, will the descendant of Marcus appear soon? Update when possible-
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December 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 39 review:
Dang, the nazis never cease to exist on BioStar, huh? It's good to know that Lt. Surge put the H8ters in their places.
And one thing I really liked was the legendary Pokemon's raid on the camp, that was EPIC.
HM Slave, that's actually a common nickname for what some people consider "utility Pokemon". 0wn1n4t0r isn't the first guy to name a Pokemon that.
That's classic nazis for you! Heartless, brutal, unkind, irrationally fanatical, and having no understanding of positive moral values. And I like how Lucas rescued that woman and her unborn child, you've certainly made him awesome in this story.
Oh wow, she got screwed up, big time. o_o
As with Arceus, I felt like puking too when I saw those gross things happen. And he once again gets another mate! XD
0wn1n4t0r is a troll in Halo servers too, huh? He also killed one of Sabrina's Pokemon, this guy sure is a bastard alright. Majestic is a good for a Serperior, btw.
Lol, more breast-feeding. XD
Update when possible-
Dang, the nazis never cease to exist on BioStar, huh? It's good to know that Lt. Surge put the H8ters in their places.
And one thing I really liked was the legendary Pokemon's raid on the camp, that was EPIC.
HM Slave, that's actually a common nickname for what some people consider "utility Pokemon". 0wn1n4t0r isn't the first guy to name a Pokemon that.
That's classic nazis for you! Heartless, brutal, unkind, irrationally fanatical, and having no understanding of positive moral values. And I like how Lucas rescued that woman and her unborn child, you've certainly made him awesome in this story.
Oh wow, she got screwed up, big time. o_o
As with Arceus, I felt like puking too when I saw those gross things happen. And he once again gets another mate! XD
0wn1n4t0r is a troll in Halo servers too, huh? He also killed one of Sabrina's Pokemon, this guy sure is a bastard alright. Majestic is a good for a Serperior, btw.
Lol, more breast-feeding. XD
Update when possible-
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December 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 38 review:
Those H8ters really belong in the hell they're going to. They'll definitely get along with Satan just fine.
I feel so bad for Arceus that only God has the vocabulary to explain it, and the ones who harmed him definitely deserve to die painful deaths.
Lucas is so darn lucky with the ladies, I almost envy him at times. XD
Huh, I thought I'd see the specific court trials I added to this. :\
Meh, oh well. Update when possible-
Those H8ters really belong in the hell they're going to. They'll definitely get along with Satan just fine.
I feel so bad for Arceus that only God has the vocabulary to explain it, and the ones who harmed him definitely deserve to die painful deaths.
Lucas is so darn lucky with the ladies, I almost envy him at times. XD
Huh, I thought I'd see the specific court trials I added to this. :\
Meh, oh well. Update when possible-