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September 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 27 review:
"THOSE...THOSE...NO-GOOD, VILE, UNFORGIVABLE, BASTARDS!! Rita Skeeter is annoying enough, but the Prophet lying about you like that...It just p***es me off! I'm going to sue them! I'll let father know about this! Those creeps will pay, you'll see, my darling Narcissa!"
o_o
Cool your circuits, Lucas! (Ironic that I'm saying that, :P )
The first paragraph was a little too long, but other than that it was relatively decent. Meta Knight should have chopped Silver to bits when he had the chance, though.
Who is Helena by the way, an OC? And...why does she refer to him as her "son"? o_O
Silver really needs to learn how to be a better sport when it comes to losing, and Arceus should have blasted him when he kicked him in the stomach.
Will Cilan be making an appearance in another chapter? (I was sort of bummed out when he didn't participate in the race).
Why is it that I've seen Katara making so many appearances in fanfic stories? (Odd)
I have an idea of who you should put in the next chapter (PM me if you want to know).
Update when you can-
"THOSE...THOSE...NO-GOOD, VILE, UNFORGIVABLE, BASTARDS!! Rita Skeeter is annoying enough, but the Prophet lying about you like that...It just p***es me off! I'm going to sue them! I'll let father know about this! Those creeps will pay, you'll see, my darling Narcissa!"
o_o
Cool your circuits, Lucas! (Ironic that I'm saying that, :P )
The first paragraph was a little too long, but other than that it was relatively decent. Meta Knight should have chopped Silver to bits when he had the chance, though.
Who is Helena by the way, an OC? And...why does she refer to him as her "son"? o_O
Silver really needs to learn how to be a better sport when it comes to losing, and Arceus should have blasted him when he kicked him in the stomach.
Will Cilan be making an appearance in another chapter? (I was sort of bummed out when he didn't participate in the race).
Why is it that I've seen Katara making so many appearances in fanfic stories? (Odd)
I have an idea of who you should put in the next chapter (PM me if you want to know).
Update when you can-
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September 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 26:
Right on, Lucas! :D
I wonder what he'll name his children...
It's good to see Arceus being nice to those kids, it gives an even better feel to the story.
Um, it's a little odd that Mika suddenly became Melia's age so quickly. (Although I don't mind her gaining an attractive appearance)
Draco Malfoy is in this story now? Dang it, I can't believe he'd torture Lily like that! D:
Officer Jenny should have sent him to his death, but she gave him the easy treatment. -_-
Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter, and update when you can.
Right on, Lucas! :D
I wonder what he'll name his children...
It's good to see Arceus being nice to those kids, it gives an even better feel to the story.
Um, it's a little odd that Mika suddenly became Melia's age so quickly. (Although I don't mind her gaining an attractive appearance)
Draco Malfoy is in this story now? Dang it, I can't believe he'd torture Lily like that! D:
Officer Jenny should have sent him to his death, but she gave him the easy treatment. -_-
Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter, and update when you can.
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September 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25 review:
I wonder, will Rayquaza be shooting down any starships in the future?
Ugh, just being reminded of that historical disaster (which the girls in the story suffered through) makes my skin tingle with rage. -_-
This chapter reminds me of the "Tower of Terror" episode (of the anime), although the situation and plot is completely different. It also makes me think of that Ghost of the maiden's peak too.
Agh, the women in this story really get battered, in spite of not doing anything to deserve it.
Whenever I see the name Maria, I always think of Eggman's cousin. XD I wonder what the story would be like if she was in it.
In the next chapter, I wonder what would happen if Majora made an entry?
Update when possible-
I wonder, will Rayquaza be shooting down any starships in the future?
Ugh, just being reminded of that historical disaster (which the girls in the story suffered through) makes my skin tingle with rage. -_-
This chapter reminds me of the "Tower of Terror" episode (of the anime), although the situation and plot is completely different. It also makes me think of that Ghost of the maiden's peak too.
Agh, the women in this story really get battered, in spite of not doing anything to deserve it.
Whenever I see the name Maria, I always think of Eggman's cousin. XD I wonder what the story would be like if she was in it.
In the next chapter, I wonder what would happen if Majora made an entry?
Update when possible-
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September 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 24 (or 25...?) review:
I fully agree with Silver's attitude towards racists, although he was making an understatement right there (in my opinion, at least).
Looks like those nazis that attacked the wealthy family had adopted another disgusting trait that the fascists possessed (stealing money). They're just as pathetic in this story as they were in real life.
Whew, I was worried about Lucas for a little bit.
Man, Arceus turned into an emotional wreck. I feel kinda bad for him right now.
I thought the deniers were going to kill Lucas's girls for a few minutes, I didn't expect them to live through that.
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I fully agree with Silver's attitude towards racists, although he was making an understatement right there (in my opinion, at least).
Looks like those nazis that attacked the wealthy family had adopted another disgusting trait that the fascists possessed (stealing money). They're just as pathetic in this story as they were in real life.
Whew, I was worried about Lucas for a little bit.
Man, Arceus turned into an emotional wreck. I feel kinda bad for him right now.
I thought the deniers were going to kill Lucas's girls for a few minutes, I didn't expect them to live through that.
Update when possible-
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August 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23 review:
The Nazis received punishments that are far too lenient in this story. The evil doctor should have been given a painful death that is so horrific that it would be inappropriate to list it here. (Yes, my hatred for the nazis is mindblowing)
Dammit, the animal abusers and the sexist criminals are STILL alive? They haven't been all exterminated yet, huh?
By the way, what does oer mean?
I didn't expect Ash to have romantic interest in a Pokemon... o_o
Latias can talk too, huh? Silver needs to get killed off already, seriously, he has to pay for what he's done to Arceus.
I was happy to see Cassidy and Butch in the story, even though it was for a few seconds.
Update when possible.
The Nazis received punishments that are far too lenient in this story. The evil doctor should have been given a painful death that is so horrific that it would be inappropriate to list it here. (Yes, my hatred for the nazis is mindblowing)
Dammit, the animal abusers and the sexist criminals are STILL alive? They haven't been all exterminated yet, huh?
By the way, what does oer mean?
I didn't expect Ash to have romantic interest in a Pokemon... o_o
Latias can talk too, huh? Silver needs to get killed off already, seriously, he has to pay for what he's done to Arceus.
I was happy to see Cassidy and Butch in the story, even though it was for a few seconds.
Update when possible.
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August 18, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 22 review:
The demon from Johto returns once again, and he is just as cruel here as he is in the games. If he really is the son of Giovanni, that wouldn't be surprising at all.
Paul was going far too easy on that jerk, he really should have beaten Silver to a pulp.
And I liked the boo part, but...I believe Trip should have received a punishment for being annoying. I do not like that guy.
-_-
Jeez, the jewish women got trashed like hell. I hope the poor girls get healed up soon.
The ending was pretty decent, and I await to see the next chapter.
Update when possible-
:D
The demon from Johto returns once again, and he is just as cruel here as he is in the games. If he really is the son of Giovanni, that wouldn't be surprising at all.
Paul was going far too easy on that jerk, he really should have beaten Silver to a pulp.
And I liked the boo part, but...I believe Trip should have received a punishment for being annoying. I do not like that guy.
-_-
Jeez, the jewish women got trashed like hell. I hope the poor girls get healed up soon.
The ending was pretty decent, and I await to see the next chapter.
Update when possible-
:D
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August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21 review:
Giovanni SHOULD be given the death sentence in my opinion. The only suitable punishment for such an evil demon.
Oh, wow, Lucas's nightmare was messed up. o_o
I have a rather distrustful feeling about Bowser, I sense that he might turn on Arceus and co., then commit the malicious acts similar to what he has performed in the past.
The Mushroom world is now one with BioStar? I did not expect that, like, at all. o_0
I don't think the font codes (like [I][B]) work in aff stories, so that wouldn't be too good of an idea to put them in there. :P
ARGH! Cliff-hanger!
Update when possible-
Giovanni SHOULD be given the death sentence in my opinion. The only suitable punishment for such an evil demon.
Oh, wow, Lucas's nightmare was messed up. o_o
I have a rather distrustful feeling about Bowser, I sense that he might turn on Arceus and co., then commit the malicious acts similar to what he has performed in the past.
The Mushroom world is now one with BioStar? I did not expect that, like, at all. o_0
I don't think the font codes (like [I][B]) work in aff stories, so that wouldn't be too good of an idea to put them in there. :P
ARGH! Cliff-hanger!
Update when possible-
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August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Objekt 279? I wonder what that is. And I also did not know that Sinnoh had its own separate time frame.
Ugh, I do not like New York city, it's...I can't really find a word to describe why I dislike it. Ugh, the thought of the nazis doing those things still pisses me off to a remarkable degree.
The President has a Charizard? That is quite a surprise-
I have a bad feeling about Pachacamac, as if he intends to do an antagonistic thing in the future. Alright! Ganondorf is in this chapter! (Ganondorf rules!)
Go Lucas! XD
Neo Team Magma and Team Aqua? Argh, these creeps keep coming out of the woodwork like crazy.
Oh great, Arceus and the other legendary Pokemon get tortured, AGAIN?
Giovanni should have been killed, not arrested, killed.
Arceus got trashed...again. Is he going to live? o_o
Update soon if you can.
Ugh, I do not like New York city, it's...I can't really find a word to describe why I dislike it. Ugh, the thought of the nazis doing those things still pisses me off to a remarkable degree.
The President has a Charizard? That is quite a surprise-
I have a bad feeling about Pachacamac, as if he intends to do an antagonistic thing in the future. Alright! Ganondorf is in this chapter! (Ganondorf rules!)
Go Lucas! XD
Neo Team Magma and Team Aqua? Argh, these creeps keep coming out of the woodwork like crazy.
Oh great, Arceus and the other legendary Pokemon get tortured, AGAIN?
Giovanni should have been killed, not arrested, killed.
Arceus got trashed...again. Is he going to live? o_o
Update soon if you can.
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August 6, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19 review:
o_O
Um, wow. I didn't expect Shylulu to bear that many children. I gained an odd image in my head when I read that part.
Sonic is in the story! YEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The part with Lucas and Elizabeth, that was...wild.
Lucas also mated with the cat girl...? o_o
Although I know nothing about Seek and Destroy, I get the idea that the next chapter will be rather interesting.
Update soon, and I'll review (when possible).
o_O
Um, wow. I didn't expect Shylulu to bear that many children. I gained an odd image in my head when I read that part.
Sonic is in the story! YEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The part with Lucas and Elizabeth, that was...wild.
Lucas also mated with the cat girl...? o_o
Although I know nothing about Seek and Destroy, I get the idea that the next chapter will be rather interesting.
Update soon, and I'll review (when possible).
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July 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18 review:
The beginning...I loved it. XD
Alright, Mario's in the story! Cool, and who is Meilulu, an OC?
How else will Female Dog be punished, I wonder?
The punishments Sergei has received, far too soft they are.
NICE, Lucas is one lucky guy! XD
The flashback part was rather grim. I feel quite bad for Galice.
Shadow and Knuckles are in the story now?! AWESOME!!!!!!! Er, wait, awesome is too weak a word for that. :P
Another thing I didn't expect at all, really, was Tikal being resurrected as well. And her father...Pachacamac must have gotten really stupid. Does he really think he can win a conflict against Arceus and friends?
The end part, now I REALLY enjoyed that. XD
This was probably one of the best chapters I've read in the story, yeesss! Update when you can, because I have a feeling this story will get even better.
The beginning...I loved it. XD
Alright, Mario's in the story! Cool, and who is Meilulu, an OC?
How else will Female Dog be punished, I wonder?
The punishments Sergei has received, far too soft they are.
NICE, Lucas is one lucky guy! XD
The flashback part was rather grim. I feel quite bad for Galice.
Shadow and Knuckles are in the story now?! AWESOME!!!!!!! Er, wait, awesome is too weak a word for that. :P
Another thing I didn't expect at all, really, was Tikal being resurrected as well. And her father...Pachacamac must have gotten really stupid. Does he really think he can win a conflict against Arceus and friends?
The end part, now I REALLY enjoyed that. XD
This was probably one of the best chapters I've read in the story, yeesss! Update when you can, because I have a feeling this story will get even better.