rate_review Reviews

please continue

it has a good story line but ime not a yaoi fan. as for including the other girls Yukari fits since you already said that shadine are hated more than witches and she will still try to go after Moka. Kurumu would probly still try to steal Tsukune from Moka. you could probably write out Mizore since Tsukune probably wont be writeing as the victim in the newspaper. but most people like her.

I like it! Please update soon. It has potential for a great fic