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August 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love the way your write this. It's very great to read, and very funny sometimes!. Your character comes alive and you use the Pokemon world as a good backdrop for the story you want to tell without getting carried away with it.
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July 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
i like your writing style, its refreshingly down to earth
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July 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This seems alright so far, Anne has some odd ideas about how to handle a battle hope that dosn't cause her trouble down the road. Also could go into more detail with the ero stuff.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Always good to see new blood around here, This seems to have some promise but not enough here to say much about. Looking forward to more plot soon.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae