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August 31, 2018 at 12:00 AM
you really need to finish this story.
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March 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM
great story :) look to read more ^^
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July 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favorite pokemon stories ever!!!
I have always thought of capturing people with pokeballs and using them for fun...
I wish more people would write stories like this... I've noticed that there is no way of contacting you and that bothers me I would like for you to write some more to it, maybe add some anal and dp and add a bit more story to it. I'd imagine that more people would know of that.
I like that ash is slowly showing that he has feelings for Misty, stick with that...
I'm normally against steeling Stories but this being fanfiction and you not being able to get in touch with I'd like to inform you that I will be asking others to edit, continue and or base a story off of it.
I'd very much like you to do some of this but I can't....
Thank you very much for the story...
Will someone please pick this up?
I suggest ash and Misty falling in love but in a bdsm way and probably only one r
"True" love seen to fallow the caricature.
I would like to see more anal maybe some dp.
I'd like to see more pain, sadness, discomfort, and a pinch of love, humor happiness and overall content. In the end ashes "pokemon" should be content about everything.
Bring back Brock more...
But toss are my suggestions just please catch more pokemon.
I have always thought of capturing people with pokeballs and using them for fun...
I wish more people would write stories like this... I've noticed that there is no way of contacting you and that bothers me I would like for you to write some more to it, maybe add some anal and dp and add a bit more story to it. I'd imagine that more people would know of that.
I like that ash is slowly showing that he has feelings for Misty, stick with that...
I'm normally against steeling Stories but this being fanfiction and you not being able to get in touch with I'd like to inform you that I will be asking others to edit, continue and or base a story off of it.
I'd very much like you to do some of this but I can't....
Thank you very much for the story...
Will someone please pick this up?
I suggest ash and Misty falling in love but in a bdsm way and probably only one r
"True" love seen to fallow the caricature.
I would like to see more anal maybe some dp.
I'd like to see more pain, sadness, discomfort, and a pinch of love, humor happiness and overall content. In the end ashes "pokemon" should be content about everything.
Bring back Brock more...
But toss are my suggestions just please catch more pokemon.
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July 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Will someone please do something with this?
At least a story about catching people.
At least a story about catching people.
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December 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
who's next lyra,sabrina,iris in chapter 9?
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September 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So, ever going to continue this or what?
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August 14, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happen's in chapter 9. The chapter thing is for my record so I know which chapter I have read to. So please update as soon as you can.
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August 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Yup, he's still a dick. Hope a building falls on him!
And did misty use teleport?
And did misty use teleport?
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August 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I wasn't sure about this story, but this chapter alone made it worth reading, keep up the great writing. I love it. -WWMH-
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August 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
haha Tackle attack! Dawn is so spacey, but it's not to have a somewhat light air to this dark-ish fic. I feel like I am still most interested in Misty, as she seems to be the most uncomfortable and most indignant right now. :) Nice chapter! Keep up the good work!