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August 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Poor Misty!
I really like this story, your Ash is so evil lol. I like that Brock still had his preference for nurse Jenny, I can't imagine how many girls he's going to have locked away by the end of this! I enjoyed your writing style, good job!
Hope you continue!
I really like this story, your Ash is so evil lol. I like that Brock still had his preference for nurse Jenny, I can't imagine how many girls he's going to have locked away by the end of this! I enjoyed your writing style, good job!
Hope you continue!
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August 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happen's next so please update as soon as you can thank you.
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Cool story keep it going would like to see duplica from the house of imate involved
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July 31, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Okay...so it nothing but sex plot right? As long as its clear... And Ash gets caught in a Poke-ball, maybe? I still think he is a dick... but Dawn is a dumbass! Lol
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July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You should end this story (when you might end it) with either misty killing herself or ash coming to his senses or people enslaving each other with poke balls.
I am not riffing in your story but ... ash is kind ( really huge ) of a dick. Hope you write more. And hope ash dies or something ... No offense.
I am not riffing in your story but ... ash is kind ( really huge ) of a dick. Hope you write more. And hope ash dies or something ... No offense.