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My character can join the group if you want, it is a male trainer named Chase he is travelling Kanto after losing in the Sinnoh league, his partner and lover is a female Lucario, Chase dresses like a biker, black leather jacket, blue jeans, boots, rider gloves, while his Lucario is the strong silent and jealous type, so if they do join the group, she glares at Yellow whenever her and Chase talk. Chase's hair is brown, and he has hazel eyes, he has other Pokemon on his team, his Charmeleon, his starter from Sinnoh Piplup, a Jynx from Kanto, and a Pidgeotto.

Changing the name of my character to Casey (Male)

Great fic...but just one thing, don't take it as flames or anything but the lemon content in the story is sometimes thrown out too aburptly and awakardly. Also you know the characters in your fic seem surprisingly comfortable with the sexual hapenings. The story line is awesome and im only suggesting to put a little realness. Im guessing normally girls don't wear panties with sunkern on em. Do they?Kidding. Waiting for update

Great story, plz keep writing! I think yoyr work needs more hits and i love your sense if humor!

I love this story, if not only for the stating the obvious and wisecracks throughout. Please do continue, this is truly entertaining. -WWMH-