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November 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this story and the concept behind it with the two worlds mixing. I'm just hoping that it will continue and this isn't the end of it. I'd really like to see what happens.
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November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
FAN!~
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November 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
FAN!~
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July 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You have made a wonderful story. Too cute and adorable and ruff and seductive!!!
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February 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is amazing. xD I already picked a side I like most, and that would be Edo-Natsu and Lucy xD, sooooo cute. Man oh man what will happen! I'm sure Lion has something to say about all this!! KEEP IT UP GIRL! ;D
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February 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
update this story I like it the best!
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November 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why this story doesn't have any reviews yet! I suppose I'll be the first, then :D
First, I adore the interactions between Lucy H. and Dragion. Usually I prefer her with Dragneel, but I'm starting to become more and more attracted to this pairing. It's so sweet! She's so gentle with him, and I can see her bringing out a more confident side to him. Second, I like the inner conflict Dragion's got going on. To go back, or not to go back? The answer isn't obvious, since it could mean sacrificing Dragneel if Dragion stays (unless they figure out some sort of compromise). I can't predict what's going to happen, and that's pretty rare in fanfiction. Kudos for making a unique story! I'd also like to see some lovin' between Dragion and Lucy H. before he goes back—if he goes. I don't know how you would prefer to write a lemon for them, but I can see it as a slow, sweet, loving exploration between the two of them :D I just can't see it as dirty, unless they're in a car when it happens! XD (I did have my own one-shot idea for such a scene featuring Dragion and Lucy Ashley XD)
The only thing I don't like is the idea of Earthland-Natsu pairing up with anyone other than Lucy H. This means I like the "2 chapters in Earthland, 1 chapter in Edolas" format rather than switching off every chapter. But don't worry about that; it's simply personal preference.
Edo-Natsu doesn't come up often in fanfiction so I'm really looking forward to more. I've been checking AFF more often for this story (and Beastly Possession) so please continue! (However, I'm aware that you're participating in NaNoWriMo; updates will come after some waiting, which I understand completely. Best wishes as you write!)
~JuicyHooligan
First, I adore the interactions between Lucy H. and Dragion. Usually I prefer her with Dragneel, but I'm starting to become more and more attracted to this pairing. It's so sweet! She's so gentle with him, and I can see her bringing out a more confident side to him. Second, I like the inner conflict Dragion's got going on. To go back, or not to go back? The answer isn't obvious, since it could mean sacrificing Dragneel if Dragion stays (unless they figure out some sort of compromise). I can't predict what's going to happen, and that's pretty rare in fanfiction. Kudos for making a unique story! I'd also like to see some lovin' between Dragion and Lucy H. before he goes back—if he goes. I don't know how you would prefer to write a lemon for them, but I can see it as a slow, sweet, loving exploration between the two of them :D I just can't see it as dirty, unless they're in a car when it happens! XD (I did have my own one-shot idea for such a scene featuring Dragion and Lucy Ashley XD)
The only thing I don't like is the idea of Earthland-Natsu pairing up with anyone other than Lucy H. This means I like the "2 chapters in Earthland, 1 chapter in Edolas" format rather than switching off every chapter. But don't worry about that; it's simply personal preference.
Edo-Natsu doesn't come up often in fanfiction so I'm really looking forward to more. I've been checking AFF more often for this story (and Beastly Possession) so please continue! (However, I'm aware that you're participating in NaNoWriMo; updates will come after some waiting, which I understand completely. Best wishes as you write!)
~JuicyHooligan