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January 27, 2019 at 12:00 AM
Oh god damn it why must I find amazing fanfiction only to learn it has been dead for nearly 6 years incomplete!!!! Please Please finish this!
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August 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
since you are splitting the identities will the girl ranma be called ranko from now on? it is her official nickname
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August 31, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please, for the love of God, continue this!
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February 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed what is here so far and I am looking forward to the next chapter. ^^
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July 1, 2013 at 12:00 AM
There's a major problem with this fanfic -- the problem is that there are "no problems". What I mean by that is, where are all the usual hijinks? Where are the interruptions? The fights? The magical items? The oneshhot characters showing up just so that they can be defeated? Where are all the boys? No Ryyoga going "die Ranma" or P-chan making Ranma end up in trouble. No Tatewaki glomping onto Ranma-chan... no Konatsu, no Tsubasa, no idiotic father duo, no Happosai ect ect ect Seriously, it needs these "problems" for it to truly be fun reading.
Other lesser issues are such as Ranma being called Ranko (please let this fanon name just die already)... the lack of attention to descriptive details for clothes ect... and of course, no Ranma-chan+[Insert boy of choosing] sexual interaction. A Ranma story where Ranma only goes lesbian when doing he harem thing is just boring. At least let Tatewaki boink her and steal her harem from her :D
Other lesser issues are such as Ranma being called Ranko (please let this fanon name just die already)... the lack of attention to descriptive details for clothes ect... and of course, no Ranma-chan+[Insert boy of choosing] sexual interaction. A Ranma story where Ranma only goes lesbian when doing he harem thing is just boring. At least let Tatewaki boink her and steal her harem from her :D
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May 22, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Review for last chapter: D'aww!
Seriously, the cuteness factor between the characters has been jacked up to 11 here, without being unrealistic or too OOC. That's really impressive. I also like the pace this is going, slowly working it's way into more overt compliments and touching instead of just breaking down and having sex everywhere. (Which is doubly odd coming from me, since that's what I usually like! XD)
Anyway, keep up the good work! I'm really liking your take on Ukyo in particular.
Seriously, the cuteness factor between the characters has been jacked up to 11 here, without being unrealistic or too OOC. That's really impressive. I also like the pace this is going, slowly working it's way into more overt compliments and touching instead of just breaking down and having sex everywhere. (Which is doubly odd coming from me, since that's what I usually like! XD)
Anyway, keep up the good work! I'm really liking your take on Ukyo in particular.
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May 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved it look like things are going while
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May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Nice update. Pretty good conversation between Ukyo and Akane.
Hope to see more soon.
Hope to see more soon.
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May 16, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The one thing I wish had been done different is to have included Kodachi.
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February 20, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Very fun story! Interesting plot twists and a lot of sexy character interactions.
I think you've got a good writing style, and you have a pretty strong grasp of the characters, i can actually almost believe something like this happening in the original series. Eh well to a degree at least ;) i hope theres more chapters to this, its really a great read. Erotic and fun, without being over the top.
Interested in seeing how Akane finally gets involved in this Love Fest. And please tell me there'll be a few chapters somewhere that involve Ranma having to deal with Kuno, Ryoga, and Mousse, and of course somethings got to happen with Kodachi. Theres no way any of them would sit on the sidelines and let something like this go uncontested. Dont need any huge story arc's involving them, i'd much rather read about Ranma's growing comfort and acceptance in his female form(by the way, the scene where Ranma and Cologne were talking about how people every perceive Ranma, i felt, was really well writen, and helped set the tone in the early chapters) and how the girls work through their issues and get closer. But they should definitely help provide some awkward moments :)
Great story, please give me more
I think you've got a good writing style, and you have a pretty strong grasp of the characters, i can actually almost believe something like this happening in the original series. Eh well to a degree at least ;) i hope theres more chapters to this, its really a great read. Erotic and fun, without being over the top.
Interested in seeing how Akane finally gets involved in this Love Fest. And please tell me there'll be a few chapters somewhere that involve Ranma having to deal with Kuno, Ryoga, and Mousse, and of course somethings got to happen with Kodachi. Theres no way any of them would sit on the sidelines and let something like this go uncontested. Dont need any huge story arc's involving them, i'd much rather read about Ranma's growing comfort and acceptance in his female form(by the way, the scene where Ranma and Cologne were talking about how people every perceive Ranma, i felt, was really well writen, and helped set the tone in the early chapters) and how the girls work through their issues and get closer. But they should definitely help provide some awkward moments :)
Great story, please give me more