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February 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well that was fun and it looks like Shampoo and Ukyo are growing closer together ^^ Curious to see how Akane will come to be a more solid part it all (given how theres alot of ranma AND Ukyo, ukyo and ranma, ukyo and shampoo) but little with Akane just yet...But im sure you will get to it soon enough
Looking forward to it~
Looking forward to it~
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December 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! It's scaling back a bit from the rampant sexiness from last time, but that's probably good. Everyone needs a chance to rest and recharge from last chapter. XD
But poor Akane needs to get in on the action soon. Perhaps Ukyo and Shampoo tag team shows her how sexy she really is? Or! Since Akane's getting over her handicaps/phobias, they take her swimming. Shampoo will need some water proof soap, of course...
Anyway, keep it up! :)
But poor Akane needs to get in on the action soon. Perhaps Ukyo and Shampoo tag team shows her how sexy she really is? Or! Since Akane's getting over her handicaps/phobias, they take her swimming. Shampoo will need some water proof soap, of course...
Anyway, keep it up! :)
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October 8, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff, super hot! I love how this is slowly getting hotter as the story goes on. Ukyo becoming the dom in the relationship, too... now that's a twist I didn't see coming, but I have to admit, I do like it. Keep up the great work!
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September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
An intriguing story so far, and I'm looking forward to seeing where you take it.
However, I felt that Ranma's self-declaration of "I love being a girl, too", at the end of chapter 3, was, perhaps, a bit...vague, or unintentionally misleading, as it can be taken in many ways (especially as there has been no indication of Ranma having ever done anything similar in male form; one can 'assume' that he has, but there is nothing in canon or this story to substantiate such an assumption). Perhaps some introspection on Ranma's part as to...say...trying to compare the two different experiences, or better defining just what his statement implies (some particular aspect of being a girl (the feelings of pleasure, perhaps) or of being a girl in general), or some indication that he was trying to 'convince' himself as to the validity of the statement.
On another aspect of the story...
I understand the story premise, and I understand that the 'happily ever after' ending would have Ranma, Akane, Shampoo, and Ukyo all joining together under 'The Lovers' Law', but...as I'm sure you're aware, life has the tendency to rarely grant anyone a 'perfect' happily ever after.
I was wondering how things would turn out if, say...one of the girls just couldn't accept such a union? Or, if another girl were unintentionally and unexpectedly drawn into their forming union? It's something to consider, at least.
However, I felt that Ranma's self-declaration of "I love being a girl, too", at the end of chapter 3, was, perhaps, a bit...vague, or unintentionally misleading, as it can be taken in many ways (especially as there has been no indication of Ranma having ever done anything similar in male form; one can 'assume' that he has, but there is nothing in canon or this story to substantiate such an assumption). Perhaps some introspection on Ranma's part as to...say...trying to compare the two different experiences, or better defining just what his statement implies (some particular aspect of being a girl (the feelings of pleasure, perhaps) or of being a girl in general), or some indication that he was trying to 'convince' himself as to the validity of the statement.
On another aspect of the story...
I understand the story premise, and I understand that the 'happily ever after' ending would have Ranma, Akane, Shampoo, and Ukyo all joining together under 'The Lovers' Law', but...as I'm sure you're aware, life has the tendency to rarely grant anyone a 'perfect' happily ever after.
I was wondering how things would turn out if, say...one of the girls just couldn't accept such a union? Or, if another girl were unintentionally and unexpectedly drawn into their forming union? It's something to consider, at least.
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September 17, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good chapter.
I like the idea of how Ranma's gonna use the cooking training to get the girls to spend more time together.
Not much else to say at this point.
Keep up the good work!
I like the idea of how Ranma's gonna use the cooking training to get the girls to spend more time together.
Not much else to say at this point.
Keep up the good work!
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September 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Interesting fic so far, I'm particularly looking forward to Uyko myself.