rate_review Reviews

I love that!!!! I actually didn't think Sabastian would blush. He's just such a cool customer with that sinful smirk I thought he'd just do it and smirk, driving Ceil crazy that he couldn't get a reaction. ^_^ Enjoyed it!

I'll admit that its obvious that this story was written quickly and probably not as seriously as something that had been given more time. HOWEVER, it doesn't make it any less fun!!!!
I firmly believe that were you to give this a bit more time this germ of an idea could take on a whole new life. I believe you've even set up room for a second chapter at the end of this one with the mention of just how far the contract goes. However were you to decide to make this into a longer story there's one thing that's particularly crucial you nail down,time. If this is an out of cannon fic and Alois is alive in the future goody fun with modern life, if its the Kuroshitsuji Story line wonderful as well but they didn't have cell phones. I will add at the end of this the disclaimer I always add: I am NOT trying to be mean I am trying to give constructive criticism and well earned praise. I rarely review at all unless I truly enjoyed the story. Please don't flame me. If you really feel you must please do me the courtesy of giving me an even char on both sides.

Oh my lord, I just about died x'D
This (and that fact that they are incredibly adorable) is why Ciel and Alois are just plain awesome.

This is really funny, I love it! Please don't take it down <3

Hahahaha!!! LOL Funny fic please do more;)Xxx

A lot more detail and maybe Sebastian actually having to work himself up to an orgasm would have made this better imo. Also, as a rule, it's never a good idea to put author's notes in the middle of your fic.