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March 18, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I have to say......I really enjoyed this story....but I just could not care about the last couple of chapters once you revealed what couple it was going to end with....I don't care about Sting....and I have a hard time thinking anybody cares about him for more then his looks....because besides that.....he's really quite pathetic....also...you're summary is a lie.....it's not equal parts. This thing was Lucy/Sting from begining to end whith just tiny teasings of NaLu....
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February 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So much loves!Sting needs love too, please continue... and the steamy scenes are fabulous!
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January 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your story is really really great, seeing as the people stay very in character even though you put them into such a mature situation! :) Plus I think the plot's super creative and your style is nice to read.
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December 21, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is phenomenal, I'm not even exaggerating. I really like the how NatsuXLucyXSting angle because there are so much LisannaXNatsuXLucy out there and so little of this even though they're equally not canon love triangles. I really do hope you update soon! I love this fic (and the smut). It's addicting!
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November 23, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I've gotta say. This story plot is really good and the idea has great substance. I enjoy reading it.
That being said, I think the execution could use some work. A lot of the facts are twisted or incorrect, and the conflicts between characters are petty and resolved by unrelated problems. This fight between Lucy and Sting was about him inviting her to work with him and then doing all the work himself, right? What does any of that have to do with Lucy doing everything herself? Added to that, at the point in time where Sting is introduced, Lucy can summon 2 spirits at once for a prolonged amount of time. Having her at her limit when only calling out 2 separately is unrealistic.
I don't mean to say that the story is full of fallacies or anything. Just a few mistakes that make it a little confusing.
That being said, I think the execution could use some work. A lot of the facts are twisted or incorrect, and the conflicts between characters are petty and resolved by unrelated problems. This fight between Lucy and Sting was about him inviting her to work with him and then doing all the work himself, right? What does any of that have to do with Lucy doing everything herself? Added to that, at the point in time where Sting is introduced, Lucy can summon 2 spirits at once for a prolonged amount of time. Having her at her limit when only calling out 2 separately is unrealistic.
I don't mean to say that the story is full of fallacies or anything. Just a few mistakes that make it a little confusing.
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November 19, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi again,
Uhlala Natsu made his move, yay boy! But you made Sting really likeable for me so Im still torn between them (maybe exactly like Lucy?) With a story good as this you can afford it, to make people wait. (but please, please not to long its torture otherwise) :)
Uhlala Natsu made his move, yay boy! But you made Sting really likeable for me so Im still torn between them (maybe exactly like Lucy?) With a story good as this you can afford it, to make people wait. (but please, please not to long its torture otherwise) :)
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October 30, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hi
I have lots of compliments for you ;)
1) Its great that you update every week
2) Your story plot is thrilling and the charakters are reasonable
3) I like your writing style
Although Im a big NaLu fan, I felt sorry for Sting in the latest chapter. I hope you do not solve the triangle too quickly, I like the tension between them. In the future I would love the see another lemon scene (pretty please? ^^) Keep up the good work!
I have lots of compliments for you ;)
1) Its great that you update every week
2) Your story plot is thrilling and the charakters are reasonable
3) I like your writing style
Although Im a big NaLu fan, I felt sorry for Sting in the latest chapter. I hope you do not solve the triangle too quickly, I like the tension between them. In the future I would love the see another lemon scene (pretty please? ^^) Keep up the good work!
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October 12, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Great story, great lemon scene! Im curious what Nastu will do if he finds out why Lucy smells different... Are you going to add something (for example the fight between Natsu and and Sting) from the actual manga? Then Sting will get wounded and Lucy rushes to his side and Natsu wont understand the world anymore hehe... Anyway please update, *cough* everday cough*, soon!
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October 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow I´m glad I switched for the lemon version to AFF! You did a really good job with this chapter and finally a couple who use condoms... Please update soon, I can´t wait to read what happens next!
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October 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Updste ! And I would really like that Lucy is not only used as a sex tool! XD Sting should harbour some feelings for her ta! XD