rate_review Reviews

What a wonder you are, my friend you made the act of making love expand. The scenes, dialogue, the way you have with telling me about a man making `woopie` with another man is delicious. You have the sensitivity to not make it harsh rather gentle. Wow! The trust Takumi has in his love make it all the more precious. Keep going friend. Must read more.

Intense, emotional, wonder... That is how this chapter made me feel. Seen through other eyes. Dialogue, intense erotica, motions of lust(ok not lust close to it) awesome. You are learning how to make others feel as you do. Very good, in fact bordering on fantastic. Must go now.

Here I am again, I like how you start this story off. No denying whose talking to who. The puzzle in Takumi is an obvious give away. I don`t think he ever thought someone would care for him much less love him. I find this first chapter similiar to a first date, except it does go into more depth. Very good, you have my attention friend.

Okay, you have the way that they got used to being in each others presence established. You have the dialogue down pat. You have their obvious confusion with what they are doing to each other. Keisuke is the dominant one so far but... I`m pretty sure once they have sorted out who is to be dominant each time they1re together it will work out. You have the beginnings of a great story here.

I can't tell you how happy I was to see this here. I have been reading your stories since I found them on FFnet. Sorry I couldn't review there I refused to ever be a member since the great purge way back when, so much good stuff was lost forever. But here I can read what I want to read. And your works are definitely something I want to read. I love how well written they are, wish I could be that good... Anyway I hope one day to see what happens after All For Love, if you write it. Thank you so much, I love Takumi, and you write him just as I like.