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please update or add chapters, this is so funny i haven't laughed this hard in years

well i thought it was an pretty good time travel fic and hope it is updated soon!!!

Some very amusing moments in this completely revised version of One Piece. Gotta love the new Eel member of the crew that you added into the mix. I hope you will continue to recreate the story with all new and unexpected twists such as you have currently created. I think you are doing a pretty good job so far. One thing to consider is using spell and grammar checkers to clean out some problem sentences and you will have a great reading alternative tale.

Please update this story! It's one of very few fanfics that is well writen, true to the characters, has(or will) some more mature elements, and has the potential to be one of few fics that everyone ends up knowing about.

Please update this story! It's one of very few fanfics that is well writen, true to the characters, has(or will) some more mature elements, and has the potential to be one of few fics that everyone ends up knowing about.

Ummm, is this REALLY a harem story? I enjoy the One Piece world very much, but this sort of narrative is not what I come to an ero-site for. I feel the need to point this out since you have gone way beyond even other stories that have tons of plot before getting to anything erotic or even romantic.

SailorNemesis

great story man hope you add alvida to the harem

Good story you used two overused plots (luffy time traveling and getting smarter, and luffy joining the revolutunarys) combined them together in a good and unique way. I am looking foreword to seeing how this works out. And hope it gets updated regularly

P.S. is this on ff.net and if you want some advice from some things I noticed response