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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
4/10 I hate to say this, but this is pretty bad. First, there's too much space in the paragraphs. Second, this is all over the place. It's too fast and you don't take the time to describe the erotica. The key to writing good sex is like having good sex in real life; you have to take it nice n' slow. But, it's nice to see an unique pairing, and Catherine dragging TK around was pretty funny.