rate_review Reviews

oh my god, i loved it so damn hot, and the couplings was perfect, my favorite has Always been Nabiki with Shampoo so couldn't be better, i hope you write more stories with does two, and maybe some more for this storyline maybe, anyway i will be waiting for your next story

Enjoyed this story. Pretty well writen. A few grammar and spelling mistakes, but nothing too distracting.

I would read more chapters :)

Setting aside the OOCness, there was a ton of really lovely wet yuri fun to be had. But then you went and turned Ranma back to a guy…which under most circumstances would be fine. However, after all the great teasing in the pool, and the excellent Nabiki/Shampoo and Kasumi/Ukyo scenes, it really was kind of a letdown to be back to boring old boy-type Ranma. So I can't say I was in love with the ending, but the buildup was quite enjoyable. Thanks for posting.