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for Ken-san\'s Checkup

by SangoHuntress1977

person KomouriNeko
schedule July 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hello! I really enjoyed reading this but have a suggestion! I thought overall that the piece was well written and well researched, the checkup was easy to visualize. That being said I must confess that I quickly became bored with a lot of it and skipped quite a bit to the end. It might be my ADD here but I believe you could shorten the exam without compromising the knowledge you used while optimizing the flow. I look forward to any future writings! Cheers!

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