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Wow, I can see problems if Itsuke doesn`t take Keisuke up on his offer. Very graphic, very rousing, very sad--- how the slavers got their `property` to preform even if they didn`t want to. You were right on with setting the scene, dialogue, frustration, and anguish. Very good. I admire Keisuke for admitting he hasn`t got the stamina to keep up. Wow, as I said before. Keep writing and revising my friend.

Hmmmmmm, okay, that`s something I never thought of, hmmmmm, okay. You have me blushing my friend. The way you set the scene is exact, the dialogue telling, and the sex well....... Very, very, interesting, in the best way I can think of... What are those three going to be up to next.

Just finished reading three chapters, wow. Sammy has her hands full but is getting on with her Japanese group. I especially enjoyed how she introduced them to three Legends. Precise, excited `brought a smile to me lips` and damn cute were the only words to describe how It was. As usual, you are getting much better, dialogue on point. Seems like a rodeo but I like it. Descriptions are correct, not wanting anything. Good read. The next chapter was heart wrenching, seeing how much each man means to the others... don`t break them up. The next chapter was sobering, psychiastic can either make or break you. You made it work, Cudos my friend, you made almost everything clear and excellent dialogue in all. Must go.

Well, I never said the paparattezzee were nice. I think that how Keisuke and that detective handled them was correct. Dialogue was right on, the way that the crowd moved was scary but similiar to how crowds are with celebrities. The chapter zipped along and was on target with what was going on there. I was impressed.

Shopping for new clothes is a chore for any one, for two men to do it is interesting. Keisuke being `hit on` by those sales clerks is a hoot. It takes a lot to outfit a little guy. You can understand the amusement found in his grandfather`s eyes when he saw his volital grandson try to handle all the `ladies` who insisted that they knew what his son wanted. The dialogue was intriguing but it was a good thing to see how his grandfather and Keisuke reacted to each other and his little one`s needs. The chapter was needed to round out the fact that soon, hopefully, his little one will be going home with Keisuke. Must read more.

Back at Sammy`s place, the multi-problems that are facing the two lovers are talked over there. The problem with finding the slaver and her horde of nasties are the first part. The dialogue is crisp and clear. `Never have had any problem telling whose talking to who. The main quiry of the racers is how is Keisuke going to get into the professional racing circuit now, where to look next for those evil people before they set up shop again. You give the gist in your own way, very good. Let me read more.

What a heart wrenching scene I just went through. Itsuke and Takumi talking about their horrendous time in that hell hole. What Itsuke had to do in order to stay alive. I give him `chops` for helping his best friend out when he wasn`t breathing. You could tell the anguish in Itsuke`s voice when he told of some of the things he had to do. Takumi asked for his forgiveness for not being able to save him from the torture. They both had a lot of healing to do. Itsuke felt like he had to say good bye for a bit. He didn`t understand his feelings for Takumi except to say that he loved Tak in a different way. He has to sort things out. Wow, what power in this chapter.

I hate courtrooms. The amount of torture that the bf had to go through is horrible. The dialogue is on point, the descriptions are graphic and the way Keisuke feels is understandable. Excellent story telling in this chapter. Must read on.

Another start of another story, This is a wonderful way to start this chapter off. Nikaru and Keitusuke getting to know one another. Takumi visiting with Nikaru although still too weak to do more than just talk with the small boy, falling asleep before the visit is over shows how weak Takumi is. The caring that Keisuke shows for the rest of the former slave children by giving them all presents is touching, very emotional. The fact that Keisuke cared enough to ask the detective if he could take one or some of the children into his home showed true conpassion. Very moving, excellent dialogue, you still have the touch my friend. Let me read on.

Okay, I got confused when you said the same thing twice. Then I got a clue when I remembered that you also had `Lemon Twist` at the beginning of the second part. It must have hurt Takumi like hell to have to know thathe had to wait for a drug to kick in to get relief from his hard on. The way Keisuke loved, supported, and cared about his feelings and frustration were evident in the way he talked and reacted with Takumi. Excellent how you made me feel like I was in the bathroom with them, feeling the pain and agony of both. Excellent dialogue. You made a power house out of a few words, wow. Let me read on.