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April 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Now I better understand Samantha Running Wolf. With a tramatic history as has unfolded, it is amazing that she is so stable in a weird, psychopathic way. There are those around who are worse than she is. You brought us into Twylah`s home, explained Sammy`s past, and did it with pinache. Excellent how angry Sammy got on the phone, the dialogue was great, and the confusion in Etsuya priceless. Another chapter well done. Let me read on.
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April 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, what horrors Takumi has in his nightmares. Seeing one of them is enough. The way Keisuke held him gently while being told of what Takumi thinks he did, is wrenching. Awesome on how the angst, pain and relization made Takumi feel. Excellent story telling, dialogue was great, very good my friend. Let me read more as soon as I stop...
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April 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Itsuke has horrid nightmares also. The poor man being tortured and raped while being told that his preforming these tasks would help Itsuke and Takumi out, were all lies. The pain this man feels wouldn`t be so bad if not for the fact that he has to come to grips with himself before he can see Takumi again. Excellent how you have me `see` what happened to the man. The emotion and torture that he is putting himself through is sad. Looking at the scenario through his eyes, I can see how Itsuke thinks of himself now as a homosexual. Good reading.
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April 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
As always...AWESOME!!!!!!!
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April 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!! I love it... aww poor Itsuke in danger because of his brand... *pumps fist in the air* Help them out Ni! n.n