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April 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I loved this new chapter, I started to question whether this story had a direction. I'm so glad that it does. I can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully it picks up real good. Thanks for this cliffy and hope you update soon.
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March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
To be honest this 'bad' eding is silly
And has some logical errors
1 fish generally float when killed like that
2 the way you put it they are ever-growing plants which would crush the planet from the inside out and if not would still be growing when those organisms evolved and would envelope them as well
3 the 'shell' of celebi would have controll of these plants and being lobotomized wouldn't kill itself
Plus this doesn't actually link up with the story whatsoever
One second they have defeated him and taken celebi and kubutops pokeballs
Next he has woken up and recaught them all even after his epiphany
And has some logical errors
1 fish generally float when killed like that
2 the way you put it they are ever-growing plants which would crush the planet from the inside out and if not would still be growing when those organisms evolved and would envelope them as well
3 the 'shell' of celebi would have controll of these plants and being lobotomized wouldn't kill itself
Plus this doesn't actually link up with the story whatsoever
One second they have defeated him and taken celebi and kubutops pokeballs
Next he has woken up and recaught them all even after his epiphany
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March 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
One thing I have to say is, is it a Pikachu or pikablu? I'm a little confused because both were used interchangeably. Pretty good chapter, I like the description of the battle between gallade and Lucario. the only thing is like I said, I would love for it to get darker and for their to be more adult situations. I feel for this site, at the moment this story is still a little unfitting. Otherwise, still really good story, something I can't say for other works on this site. Hope to see an update soon
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March 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I like this chapter. Hope to see more :D
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March 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting fic, I have to say I have not read anything like this yet. I have enjoyed reading it and hope that you continue updating. I see very little grammatical errors which is more then I can say for half the fics here. In addition I think the concept is really interesting. The only thing I do ask for is sex and I don't think it's too much to ask considering the site. Otherwise, please putting up the story as it is really entertaining
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March 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I didn't expect an update so soon. It's been like two hours lol. I'm not complaining if it sounds like it, rather I am extremely pleased. I like the direction this is going and possibly could go. Would love another update in a few hours lol but would be content with just being able to see the finality of the story as many great stories are never completed. At this point, I'm truly loving the story. Please update soon :D