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You don't know how this new chapter makes me happy. This story is one of the best KyoHaru/Ouran stories I've read! I love everything about it!
There is not much story about obliviousKyouya and inloveHaruhi and this make your story is really special. :D Please, pretty please update soon because i'm dying here! :D <3

What a great fic! I'm really enjoying Kyoya's perspective, and love the way you've taken the Host's duties to a whole new level. I'm also very excited to see that this is a recent project. I very much look forward to reading more!

I am really enjoying this story, and I look forward to more!! Thank you!!!

A steamy make-out lesson, tinges of jealousy, raging hormones and homework, oh my! Great chapter! The intensity was definitely felt, something that can only come from taking time and care with a chapter's assembly. Apologize if it makes you feel better, but in reality you are doing that to benefit your writing and readers. Still I say, 'no shame!'

Fantastic job! See you next update! :D

I know it's fanfic but, frankly, whoring out the hosts is tacky. It's one thing to pair them to one another or even to multiple characters; but to prostitute them is a cheap shot and unappealing, even on *this* website. Out of character, too. But then, so is most of what's published here. After all, it is just frap and jerk off fodder. The writing itself is fair, but stick to your day job. I'm outtie.

And so it begins...!
Yay! You updated! :)
Real life happens, no big deal. As long as you don't abandon, forgiveness and apologies aren't necessary!

DM,

I think I should first point out that this is much more well written than some of the other stories I have read. In my opinion some of the chapters are too short but that does not withhold from the flow of the story. You've kept the characters in "tune" with themselves and not made any changes to drastic. You are, indeed right, unless you are just a flawless writer you have a wonderful beta as I see no obvious spelling or grammatical errors. Way to go on a story line that isn't trite, I love that along with the random sharp turns into different plot directions you've chosen to plot out a story that isn't dead. I will stop taking up valuable time and simply say well done, my dear.

Sincerely,
Lady K

Argh! I'm late! lol
I absolutely love the angsty confusion, haha! I could just imagine it...:snog: what the...? :snog: ... Still not getting it... ::answer:: Oh. You right.
Good chapter, I can't wait for more. :)

A.k.a Fic-stalker ;)

I can't tell you how much I loved the friendly tension between Renge and Kyoya, or how much I actually giggled at his reluctance to teach Haruhi. It made perfect sense! He's SO busy with all that he does, on top of having to school-to-perfection a sure-to-be bumbling novice! Ah!
I loved it! Great job, once more!

Okay, I kind of feel like a fic-stalker, but I'm liking the new developments such... well, feelings and such. It's good to know that you are going to include the clients' emotions as well, instead of them just being faceless/baseless greedy need-mongers.

It may have been a difficult chapter for you, but it came out very well. :) I can't wait for more! (I mean, I'll wait patiently... or something like that.)