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for His Butler, Salty or Sweet?

by speedofsound

person Anon
schedule October 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Giiiiirl, that description game is on point! Yaaasss lol. And I can relate, if Sebastian was to earnestly say Ciel that's it for me and my god I just loved it. So well worded, the conversations were perfectly them. Most writing falls apart during sex scenes so it can seem slutty or whatever writers are going for but you never lost character to narration. You are a rare find, please never stop writing Black Butler

person Anon
schedule October 12, 2017 at 12:00 AM

My god is Sebastian sexy, and he never doesanything alluring to warrant it. I don't just like this story I love it. It's like watching an episode because I'm fairly sure it would take a half an hour to read the whole thing. This is duper good

person Anon
schedule October 10, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Stories this good make me mad I never searched for Black Butler fics before. I can hear them saying each line perfectly, the reasoning and wonder seems true to something Ciel would wonder about. And I love his sense of quid pro quo giving Sebastian menial tasks to even things out. This is a delight

person Loved it!
schedule September 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Great story - Ciel finally gets some action!

person auronscientist
schedule March 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Awesome conclusion! Been waiting for this much too long! Keep writing :)
schedule March 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Thank you AuronS for your review, and for taking the time to read my story. It is much appreciated! So glad you enjoyed it!
schedule February 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Can't wait to see what kind of things Ciel will let slip now that he's wasted!This is going to be fun!
schedule January 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for reading Vyperbites, and sorry for the short chapters. The next one should be longer! ^^
person Vyper
schedule January 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It was a good new chapter although short. I wish it had been longer, but that is fine. I look forward to the next chapter.
person phoeyay
schedule January 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So happy that you updated! I am loving the dark atmosphere and prime angst. There is angst, and then there is angst you can _feel_ - you are doing it right!

Also, I am greedy and I want longer chapters… no pressure though :P

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