rate_review Reviews

I love this story it always makes me cry when i read it why couldnt they just share him i mean he did turn into a vampire so harems are normal sigh r.i.p kurumu u beautiful succubus goddess

Painful story, but also a beautiful one.

Nice but depressing. A timetravel sequal is in order.

Never really understood what he saw in Moka, Kurumu seemed like a much better catch.

Very well set up, and very yummy sex scene! There were a few points where Tsukune seemed a bit OOC to me because he was just not quite innocent enough. It is very true what you said about the R+V harem setup - it is horribly cruel if you really think about it! I like that you wrote a fic that points that out well.

As usual you write your characters with an incredible intensity that pulls you into the story. I am however a firm believer that all stories, whether they are first-person or third person should be written in the past tense. It simply makes it to disjointed to the reader to have in the present tense

The Host by Stephanie Meyers is the perfect example of what I mean. It is a perfectly well written first-person story that is told firmly in the past tense.

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