rate_review Reviews

Not bad, some sexy stuff, keep honing your writing. I prefer chocolate to vanilla, though.

Oh joy, tentacle rape. Yeah, That was gonna be the full comment, but I figured I should let you know what I think of your writing instead of just blurting out the first thing that enters my mind. First off, excellent job with the characters. Second, aside from a few rough sentences with missing words or bad grammar, the story was smooth and flowed nicely. Keep writing, seriously, you have talent as a fanfic author. ^_^ -WWMH-