rate_review Reviews

Amazing characterization. The story is very well written and I can't help but to tell that all characters are in tune with who they are. The plot is thick and the frustration and heat between Mugen and Fun is going up. I liked the idea of her having his son and how Mugen is somewhat acting like his father. I will keep reading. For more reviews I seriously recommend that you post this and your one shot in fanfiction. . net

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Keep it up! I'm loving it!!!