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for Heat of the Moment

by Bishonen

person Bad Bunny Mommy
schedule January 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This really was delightful. I would have a hard time deciding whether I like this, the story about Blaziken and the trainer from the other game, or the story about Cheryl and Gardevoir better. I still find the idea of a Pokemon capturing a trainer positively enticing, but the sweet stories of love with this story and Gardevoir's story are just as wonderful. I think I might actually like this one better, however, because Gardevoir can communicate fully with Cheryl, while the love Rapidash has for this trainer is not so easy. I really enjoyed the lead-in to the sex, too, it made it seem very real. I think you might have gone overboard a little with the sex with how many times Lara came in the beginning and when Lara's using Rapidash's insides as a Stair Master, but that's a minor complaint, and overall I enjoyed this very much.
person menisdea
schedule October 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
i have read pokemon and human stories about pokemon other than human-like ones before but very rarely any f/f ones and definitely no good ones, this was really cool to find and read!
person Anon
schedule September 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Holy Crap bra is this shit for real? I been lookin for rapidash-human lezzie porn for a year, solid! Props dog, this is hella tight!
person The Todd
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lesbian Horse Sex So Hot It Makes The Reader Uncomfortable To Know They Enjoyed It This Much Five!
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great story, sexy stuff. I think you may have gone a little far with the two legs insertion plus `bicycling' but overall good job.
person Easy Breezy Beautiful Cover Girl
schedule September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Um.......well......at first I was kind of disgusted with you and I thought I would just skip it, but after a while I figured I would just take a look because maybe you made her human or something. But by the time it was clear you weren't gonna do that, I was kind of interested, and now that I'm done, I think I......I actually kind of liked this! I can't believe I actually enjoyed a poke-beastality story, but.....it was hot, I can't try to deny it! I really don't know if I ever want to see you make something like this again, but I still have to say, good job!

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