rate_review Reviews

I am not all too familiar with the anime this story is based on, so I wouldn't be able to see whether you've stretched or broken the characters compared to canon, but what I -can- say is that the characterisation seems solid to me. I got an immediate kind of "feel" for what kind of character you're portraying.
The tone of voice for this chapter is (deceptively) light-hearted, while still touching on some slightly heavier issues, like Ciel's internal struggle and Sebastian's lust and torment.
All in all, well done. My only point of "critique" is that I'd have liked a longer chapter--but even that's not really critique, it just shows I would've liked to read even more of it. =)

cant wait to see what Sebastian has planned