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July 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I love this story it is a bit slow but it provokes emotions i wish youd finish it :/
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April 28, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. The story line is amazing, and it fells like it could be used as a story arch of Sailor Moon. There are little to no grammatical errors, which is awesome! As a person who had to take several English classes in college, it makes me happy! Please continue writing the story, because I can't get enough of your work!
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April 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story drags on for FAR too long. It's like watching a fight on Dragon Ball Z: seven episodes later and Sailor Moon is still whining about trying to fight Diamond with scouts trying to stop her. I'm sorry, but your pacing is horrible. You might as well take 'Rape fic' out of your summary: 11 chapters in and there hasn't even been an actual sex scene. Hell, there isn't even a need for this to be on 'adultfanfiction'. I've read more mature fanfiction on Fanfiction.net. I want my hour and a half back. :/