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February 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
As someone who is thoroughly sick and tired of lemon writers shunting Shinosuke out of the way with some quick character assassination so that Keitaro and Tsukiko can hook up, just because they *assume* our brains would smoke and fail at the thought of someone *else* having sex in a Love Hina story, I have to say: good show.
Now to catch up on what I missed...
Now to catch up on what I missed...
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February 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, didn't see THAT particular twist coming.
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February 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
The first couple of chapters are very good. This looks like it will be a good story.
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February 11, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Nice pair of chapters! Amalla is a lot of fun here.
It will be interesting to see if/how Keitaro's encounter with Amalla will effect anything in the next chapters.
It will be interesting to see if/how Keitaro's encounter with Amalla will effect anything in the next chapters.
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February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Read the Amalla encounter. Sexy stuff. Hopefully now that he has been to love boot-camp Keitaro is ready for some harem building. 'I'll be with both of you, or neither of you. Decide.'
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February 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I cna't wait to see what happen's next. I'll bet that Keitaro will lift a lid when he find's out that she is Su's sister. I forgot her name. Sorry. So please update soon with the next chapter's. I would really like to see Haruka get some action from Keitaro just one time to see how much he has learned from spending time at the dorm with the girls.
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February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great to see you back again, hope you'll continue updating the fic. It is surprisingly deep for being, well, on this page :P
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February 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter. Gonna be fun seeing how these new elements will play out, such as Keitaro being mad at Naru and Kitsune, Motoko obviously despising him, this new girl at the end here (I assume that's either Su's adult form or her older sister), etc.
Hmmm, while I see where Naru's attitude is coming from, I don't think I like how she's acting all morally superior to Kitsune, since she's equally to blame. Eh, it's probably just stemming from her newfound jealousy/possessiveness.
Great work! Keep it up!
Hmmm, while I see where Naru's attitude is coming from, I don't think I like how she's acting all morally superior to Kitsune, since she's equally to blame. Eh, it's probably just stemming from her newfound jealousy/possessiveness.
Great work! Keep it up!
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January 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have a funny feeling that Motoko will be getting some action soon. Also another girl will get some also. Tsuruko that is. So please update as soon as you can. I can't wait to see what happen's in chapter 13. So please update as soon as you can
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January 13, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's been quite good so far, especially considering I don't usually like fics with slutty versions of modest characters. Hoping we get to the harem part. Hopefully Keitaro can tame Motoko.